My Dream Vacation

Tucked high into a saddle in the hills,
Set far above a river vale below,
With wooded glades and waters calm and still,
I cannot think a finer place to go.

A daybreak in the east will steal your breath:
Tequila sunrise bathed in swaths of pink.
A breeze is gently blowing ‘round the hill;
The solitude gives ample space to think.

The redbuds are in bloom in fuchsia hues.
The pileated drums beat out grub wars.
New life abounds, emerging from decay.
Above, a lazy red hawk circling, soars. 

When I’m away, I long here to return,
To wander oaken trails and hillsides roam.
My dream vacation, here before my eyes;
I pinch myself, for I’ve arrived back home.

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Seventh Place Winner For the My Dream Vacation Poetry Contest Sponsored by L Milton Hankins Written 03/04/2022

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 4/3/2022 4:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your awesome vacation poem and shining win Jeff! I enjoyed the read. Thanks!
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Date: 4/2/2022 3:25:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Date: 4/1/2022 1:44:00 PM
Beautiful! Home it is! M.
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 4/1/2022 2:47:00 PM
I think Frances wishes I had a bit more of the travel bug... :- Thanks!
Date: 4/1/2022 11:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful story/write. Sounds like you had a ton of fun. Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Date: 4/1/2022 9:29:00 AM
Your writing has stamina. Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/1/2022 7:52:00 AM
Jeff, congratulations on your winning poem in my recent contest. I enjoyed it immensely. Your poem was very unique among all the entries. I loved your descriptions and, of course, your opening line captured me. Very well done.
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 4/1/2022 8:21:00 AM
Thank you, and thanks for holding the contest!
Date: 3/10/2022 9:28:00 AM
Wonderful to live in your dream location. Your poem expresses this very well. Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 3/4/2022 8:18:00 AM
Your dream vacation's imagery leads to Happy Trails~ I enjoyed the trip too~ :)Paulette
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Date: 3/4/2022 7:55:00 AM
Loved the imagery of your vacation poem, Jeff. It does sound like a dream place to be. Have a great weekend, my friend. Bill
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Date: 3/4/2022 7:33:00 AM
Wow that’s sounds delightful….can I come with you? Ha. Beautifully written Jeff! Debx
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 3/4/2022 7:39:00 AM
Thanks, Deb. My wife wishes I'd travel more, but perhaps you can see why I'm content here!
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