My Dream Tree

When I was young and hearty,
I once sowed a measly seed,
And saw with awe
the paltry seed grow into
a beautiful flowering tree
permeating all around
sweet fragrance
pleasing to the soul.

I likewise sowed
a shiny silver dollar,
And with bated breath
waited to see if it grows
into my dream tree:

A tree with branches of solid silver
and sparkling silver leaves,
It will bear fruits of shiny
gold and silver coins and
make all my dreams
to come true!

With glitters in my eyes,
And overbearing anticipation,
I guarded it day and night,
Nurturing it with my
dreams and aspirations.

But days turned into years
And still I did not see
even a seedling spring forth.

Now old and at my wits' end,
I dug up the coin and held it
in my trembling hand;

"Can I have that, Grandpa?"

The boy asked as he whisked
the coin off my palm.

I stared dumbfounded at him
as he ran to a roadside vendor
and bought an ice cream!


~Abdul Malik
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Jones Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 4:43 PM
:-) congratulations
Gasun Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 9:22 AM
This is so beautiful poem you've penned my dear friend, Abdul! My biggest congratulations on your super win! Thank you so much for sharing this! I greatly enjoyed. love/hugs, Leonora
Merryman Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 8:59 AM
Abdul, congrats on your win with this humorous write! Love, Kim
Kimathi Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 4:28 AM
That was a very beautiful write Abdul! Congratulations!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 12:52 AM
Hi congratulations Abdul, this is a lovely write and well deserving of a winning spot...I am hoping for more time next week for more reading and commenting xx
A   Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 8:37 PM
Hi Abdul, your poem is amazing, love your thoughts on the topic "SEEDS" for this contest... goodnight~ LINDA
Ivy D Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 8:13 PM
congrats' SandyIvy
Dietrich Avatar
February 18, 2013 at 10:06 PM
hahahah, I think the ending of this is SO CUTE, and unexpected. you little trickster. And the meaning is actually rather deep!!! Very enjoyable poem.
Fisher Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 1:25 PM
That's a good story with quite an unexpected ending.
A   Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 9:00 PM
Abdul, another wonderful poem, and contest entry... a sweet memory... xox~pd
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