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My Dream of Failure

The night feels surreal, in flight in my dressing gown Swooping through backyards, I reach to save them from loss, but find myself falling down. Written for the contest 'Tanka me a Dream" tara jennings

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/25/2011 10:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved 1st place win in Michael's contest Tara. Love, Carol

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 2/23/2011 1:44:00 PM

Congrats Tara on your 1st place win in my contest ..always Michael

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/23/2011 1:28:00 AM

I could imagine how this dream could feel so real, way to go with your win with this scary tanka, Tara-- congrats! :)

Wilma Neels

Date: 2/22/2011 9:09:00 AM

Tara congratulations on your awesome win in MJF's contest ;-)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/22/2011 9:08:00 AM

Congrats Tara on your frist place win in the Dream Tanka contest .. enjoy your top spot for a top notch entry luv..

John Freeman

Date: 2/22/2011 7:52:00 AM

Good to see you at the top Tara, Congratulations on your poem's honored first place. Agape, Moses

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/22/2011 7:34:00 AM

amazing flow of thoughts,tara.. special congrats for the super win! :) huggs, nette

Kash Poet

Date: 2/22/2011 5:55:00 AM

nice thoughts penned here!congrats Tara on your 1st place win.

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/21/2011 11:22:00 PM

An interesting tanka. Congratulations on winning in Michael's contest with this entry.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/21/2011 10:56:00 PM

hey, this tanka is surreal too and I like it a lot. Congratulations.

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/21/2011 9:58:00 PM

Congratulations on your very fine win in the Contest, Tara Always, Annalise

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/21/2011 5:37:00 PM

Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of Michael, tara

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/21/2011 5:37:00 PM

Such a dream sounds like some I have had....they seem so real, and I wake up so heartbroken and anxious that I couldn't reach them.. Well done, Tara!!

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 2/21/2011 5:09:00 PM

Congratulations on your first place win, I enjoyed the read. Caryl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/21/2011 4:17:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/21/2011 3:23:00 PM

Congratulations on your big win with this scary dream poem. Love, Joyce

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/20/2011 1:17:00 PM

ohh very fruedian! research flying in dreams. Light & Love

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 2/17/2011 3:25:00 PM

Nice poem...don't like falling in a dream...good luck in the contest...Jimmy

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/17/2011 3:03:00 PM

Dreams of falling are not unusual, Tara. What were you trying to save? People or animals? Some of my best dreams have been about flying. This one sounds frightening, but it makes a great entry for the dream contest. You did a great job with the form, too. Thanks for the Soup Mail. It's great to see you back here. Best wishes for success in the contest! Love, Carolyn