My Dream Date

When missives of love amber winds reveal
Strumming ardent music of romantic themes
As bashful moon delights blushing eventide, 
And doting hearts aspire to call of desires;
Meet me then, darling, as memories revive
Sparkling sweet smile of twinkle in your eyes.

By the river’s edge, where passions spree,
Hand in hand we stroll in fervor of ecstasy
Beneath glimmers scintillating stellar glee
As we amble in reveries for miles and miles
Where, pulses passionate, longingly chime
Of two souls in embrace, content in paradise.

Sitting on shores, adulating river burbling,
Listening to love crooning innermost feelings,
We wish this moment will hum till eternity,
Lost in night’s glory as it cedes to dawning
When golden beams glisten mauve breeze
Inscribing on horizon our periwinkle dream.

February 5, 2023
Poem of the day on February 7, 2023
Placed 1st: My Dream Date Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Anoucheka Gangabissoon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 5/22/2023 7:01:00 AM
A magnificent creation! Congratulations on POTD, Vijay. :)
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Date: 3/20/2023 2:38:00 PM
Hello Vijay, I am glad this poem is a winner. It reads as a winner. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Date: 2/23/2023 1:22:00 PM
Congratulations for your excellent win :)
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Date: 2/22/2023 6:00:00 AM
Back with big congratulations on your well-earned contest top win, Dear friend Vijay.
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Date: 2/21/2023 9:32:00 PM
Hi Vijay, once again back to your poem, this time to congratulate you on your first place win in Anoucheka's contest!
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Date: 2/21/2023 11:59:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. Enjoyed It. Have a blessed day.........................
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Date: 2/8/2023 10:53:00 PM
great poetic dreamy loving date; congrats for being selected the poem as POD
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Date: 2/8/2023 1:53:00 PM
I was the first to comment on your wonderful poem dear Vijay, I hope not the last to tell you congratulations on your well-deserved POTD, Enjoy your honor.
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Date: 2/8/2023 1:19:00 PM
Back with heartiest congratulations on a well-deserved POTD, Vijay!:)
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Date: 2/8/2023 9:31:00 AM
Great verse, Vijay, congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 2/8/2023 8:54:00 AM
Belated congratulations on POTD for your magical dive into love Vijay ! Your eloquent words call to the reader …. Describing desire and anticipation and kissing memories with the utmost care . Sending all good wishes to you . Susan :)
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Date: 2/8/2023 8:05:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD. Wonderful poem for the honor. Sara
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/8/2023 8:33:00 AM
Thank you Sara--much appreciate.
Date: 2/8/2023 4:21:00 AM
Vijay, belated congratulations on your beautiful POTD! Your dream date is indeed so worthy! Happy Wednesday!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/8/2023 8:33:00 AM
Glad you are her my friend. Many thanks, Mike.
Date: 2/8/2023 1:01:00 AM
Hi Vijay, back to your poem, oozing with love, to congratulate you on your well deserved POTD,
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/8/2023 8:32:00 AM
Much appreciate your return visit, Valsa. Many thanks.
Date: 2/7/2023 11:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/8/2023 8:32:00 AM
Thank you Jeanette. Much appreciate.
Date: 2/7/2023 8:31:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD , Vijay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/8/2023 8:32:00 AM
Thank you Eve. Much appreciate.
Date: 2/7/2023 5:55:00 PM
Your words of romance, (these soft and dreamy moments) - certainly belong here in the spotlight. Congratulations Vijay, on Poem of the Day. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/8/2023 8:31:00 AM
Thank you for your return visit my friend. Much appreciate, as always, Brandy.
Date: 2/7/2023 5:36:00 PM
Wonderful poem!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/8/2023 8:31:00 AM
Thank you, Nancy.
Date: 2/7/2023 2:50:00 PM
Vijay, a sweet, romantic poem, congratulations on POTD!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/8/2023 8:30:00 AM
So very kind of you, Tania. Much appreciate--many thanks.
Date: 2/7/2023 2:11:00 PM
Dear Vijay "...amber winds....periwinkle dreams." Excellent imagery and a worthy POTD. Best - Ken
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/8/2023 8:30:00 AM
Glad to see you again, Ken. Much appreciate--many thanks.
Date: 2/7/2023 1:13:00 PM
wow, so romantic. Just wonderful.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/8/2023 8:29:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea. Appreciate, as always.
Date: 2/7/2023 11:08:00 AM
Vijay, wonderful poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, Constance
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/8/2023 8:29:00 AM
Many thanks, Constance. Much appreciate you visiting and commenting.
Date: 2/7/2023 9:31:00 AM
Cupid's masterpiece, scintillating like a jewel, a lyrical ballad sung in an imaginative and beautiful way. The combination of lyrical and descriptive romance and a tinge of whimsy. [Periwinkle] love it! Congratulations on POTD Vijay Pandit! Breathless~Anaya
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/8/2023 8:28:00 AM
So very kind of you, Anaya. Much appreciate your detailed insights. Many thanks.
Date: 2/7/2023 9:03:00 AM
Vijay, congratulations on your fabulous poem so well deserved potd. :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/8/2023 8:27:00 AM
Much appreciate, Fin--many thanks.
Date: 2/7/2023 9:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A very lovely/romantic write. Have a blessed day writing away...........
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/8/2023 8:27:00 AM
Thank you Paula--much appreciate.
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