My Dream Date

When missives of love amber winds reveal
Strumming ardent music of romantic themes
As bashful moon delights blushing eventide, 
And doting hearts aspire to call of desires;
Meet me then, darling, as memories revive
Sparkling sweet smile of twinkle in your eyes.

By the river’s edge, where passions spree,
Hand in hand we stroll in fervor of ecstasy
Beneath glimmers scintillating stellar glee
As we amble in reveries for miles and miles
Where, pulses passionate, longingly chime
Of two souls in embrace, content in paradise.

Sitting on shores, adulating river burbling,
Listening to love crooning innermost feelings,
We wish this moment will hum till eternity,
Lost in night’s glory as it cedes to dawning
When golden beams glisten mauve breeze
Inscribing on horizon our periwinkle dream.

February 5, 2023
Poem of the day on February 7, 2023
Placed 1st: My Dream Date Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Buehler Avatar
May 22, 2023 at 7:01 AM
A magnificent creation! Congratulations on POTD, Vijay. :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 20, 2023 at 2:38 PM
Hello Vijay, I am glad this poem is a winner. It reads as a winner. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Sands Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 1:22 PM
Congratulations for your excellent win :)
Poet Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 6:00 AM
Back with big congratulations on your well-earned contest top win, Dear friend Vijay.
George Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 9:32 PM
Hi Vijay, once again back to your poem, this time to congratulate you on your first place win in Anoucheka's contest!
Goldsmith Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 11:59 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. Enjoyed It. Have a blessed day.........................
Bangalee Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 10:53 PM
great poetic dreamy loving date; congrats for being selected the poem as POD
Poet Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 1:53 PM
I was the first to comment on your wonderful poem dear Vijay, I hope not the last to tell you congratulations on your well-deserved POTD, Enjoy your honor.
Ibeh Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 1:19 PM
Back with heartiest congratulations on a well-deserved POTD, Vijay!:)
Roper Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 9:31 AM
Great verse, Vijay, congratulations on POTD.
Lawrence Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 8:54 AM
Belated congratulations on POTD for your magical dive into love Vijay ! Your eloquent words call to the reader …. Describing desire and anticipation and kissing memories with the utmost care . Sending all good wishes to you . Susan :)
Kendrick Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 8:05 AM
Congratulations on POTD. Wonderful poem for the honor. Sara
Pandit Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 8:33 AM
Thank you Sara--much appreciate.
Gentile Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 4:21 AM
Vijay, belated congratulations on your beautiful POTD! Your dream date is indeed so worthy! Happy Wednesday!!
Pandit Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 8:33 AM
Glad you are her my friend. Many thanks, Mike.
George Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 1:01 AM
Hi Vijay, back to your poem, oozing with love, to congratulate you on your well deserved POTD,
Pandit Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 8:32 AM
Much appreciate your return visit, Valsa. Many thanks.
Meadows Avatar
February 7, 2023 at 11:05 PM
Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.
Pandit Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 8:32 AM
Thank you Jeanette. Much appreciate.
Roper Avatar
February 7, 2023 at 8:31 PM
Congratulations on POTD , Vijay
Pandit Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 8:32 AM
Thank you Eve. Much appreciate.
Nicole Avatar
February 7, 2023 at 5:55 PM
Your words of romance, (these soft and dreamy moments) - certainly belong here in the spotlight. Congratulations Vijay, on Poem of the Day. :) Hugs, Brandy
Pandit Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 8:31 AM
Thank you for your return visit my friend. Much appreciate, as always, Brandy.
Beckman  Avatar
February 7, 2023 at 5:36 PM
Wonderful poem!
Pandit Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 8:31 AM
Thank you, Nancy.
Kitchin Avatar
February 7, 2023 at 2:50 PM
Vijay, a sweet, romantic poem, congratulations on POTD!
Pandit Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 8:30 AM
So very kind of you, Tania. Much appreciate--many thanks.
Rone Avatar
February 7, 2023 at 2:11 PM
Dear Vijay "...amber winds....periwinkle dreams." Excellent imagery and a worthy POTD. Best - Ken
Pandit Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 8:30 AM
Glad to see you again, Ken. Much appreciate--many thanks.
Dietrich Avatar
February 7, 2023 at 1:13 PM
wow, so romantic. Just wonderful.
Pandit Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 8:29 AM
Thank you, Andrea. Appreciate, as always.
La France Avatar
February 7, 2023 at 11:08 AM
Vijay, wonderful poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, Constance
Pandit Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 8:29 AM
Many thanks, Constance. Much appreciate you visiting and commenting.
Anaya Avatar
February 7, 2023 at 9:31 AM
Cupid's masterpiece, scintillating like a jewel, a lyrical ballad sung in an imaginative and beautiful way. The combination of lyrical and descriptive romance and a tinge of whimsy. [Periwinkle] love it! Congratulations on POTD Vijay Pandit! Breathless~Anaya
Pandit Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 8:28 AM
So very kind of you, Anaya. Much appreciate your detailed insights. Many thanks.
Chuuk Avatar
February 7, 2023 at 9:03 AM
Vijay, congratulations on your fabulous poem so well deserved potd. :)
Pandit Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 8:27 AM
Much appreciate, Fin--many thanks.
Goldsmith Avatar
February 7, 2023 at 9:02 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A very lovely/romantic write. Have a blessed day writing away...........
Pandit Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 8:27 AM
Thank you Paula--much appreciate.
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