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My Dream Castle

When I am bored with this world When nothing gives me any more joy I become, once more, a little girl And run, hiding to my abode, with my toy! My pen, magical and whimsical Sometimes getting even musical Once it is uncapped, it begins to write in verse And seeks to please, the whole of the universe! My abode is none other than my castle Where I let go of all of my struggle A place made from my own fancy Where I can be myself, a Queen hiding in secrecy It is found high over the clouds Colored as bright as the pinkish flamingos It gives me the will to sing out loud My castle it is, where I can let go of all of my sorrows There, magic rules! There, love drools! My knight, invited by Cupid, dwells with me And submits to my every tantrum, so tactfully! There, I swim in a sea of candy And become my own star, full of folly There, I am well loved And none can have me dethroned! Shall you wish for a visit, pray, just let me know Holding hands, together we shall go And we shall bask there, in eternal light The light which makes the world shine bright! 29 Jan 2014

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Date: 2/5/2014 1:49:00 PM
ohh so, dreamy.. sweet congrats on your award, anouchs!
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Date: 2/4/2014 7:23:00 PM
This is a wonderful piece, congratulations.
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Date: 2/4/2014 11:45:00 AM
A well written poem Anoucheka! Big congrats to you on your fine win in the contest!!
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Date: 2/4/2014 6:18:00 AM
Enjoyed your write on castle and congrats on the win, Anoucheka
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Date: 2/4/2014 12:11:00 AM
Anoucheka I enjoyed this poem but it lacks description of a castle I wanted to hear about turrets and towers moats halls etc lol dingy dungeons congrats on placing ty for entering Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 1/29/2014 5:12:00 AM
Hi Anoucheka, I really enjoyed reading your poem. I could feel myself walking through the castle. I look forward to reading more of your poems.
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