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My Dream

tears fall from our eyes
universal hugs of love
peace reigns in our world


Entry: "Any Poem About Dreams" (Old or New)
Sponsor: P.D. 
3rd Place Winner






For the "Dream Land Contest" of "Olajide Adelana"

By: Carol Brown
01/18/2012
7th Place Winner

hopelovepeaceupliftingsenryu

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Quoth Theraven

May 1, 2021 at 10:01 AM

No better dream than your 'universal hugs' in peace. A Fave... -Richard

William Hughes

March 31, 2012 at 4:20 PM

Its so simple but so strong. wow.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

March 2, 2012 at 8:49 AM

A beautiful dream to have Carol, and we can hope and pray for it to come true-- I'm so sorry about your poems, maybe the time had already passed before we could retrieve it? I'm sorry I didn't realize it sooner, but that is good to know you had saved some copies of your poems...wish you all the best, Carol! hugs :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 21, 2012 at 7:56 AM

Thank you to all you exceptionally magnificent poets for your kind remarks. Love, Carol

Mario Diletto

February 20, 2012 at 8:53 PM

congrats on your win...

Samual Ronthorpe

February 20, 2012 at 4:29 PM

Carol, beautiful Senryu. Congrats on making PD's winners' list....................S.Ronthorpe

Don Johnson

February 20, 2012 at 4:03 PM

great win S C B..... well done here mate....

Jonas L. Rozario

February 20, 2012 at 12:42 PM

Congrats on your win in the contest Carol.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

February 20, 2012 at 3:57 AM

Congratulations Carol, a well deserved win xx

Robert Pettit

February 20, 2012 at 12:01 AM

Congratulations on your win Carol. This is as well as anyone can write a senryu.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 19, 2012 at 9:18 PM

congrats Carol on a great win for this amazing write so prolific .. one day maybe luv..

Poet Destroyer A

February 19, 2012 at 7:47 PM

lol.. Hi Carol, another wonderful win... now for me...... CONGRATUALTIONS! with your wonderful dreamy poem... thank you for supporting my contest ;-) ~ always*PD

Poet Destroyer A

January 27, 2012 at 1:14 AM

carol..another wonderful win..always..pd

Andrea Dietrich

January 25, 2012 at 5:58 PM

you took it in the other way of dream! very clever, Carol. Congrats on your win.

Sadaf Syed

January 25, 2012 at 6:57 AM

Congratulations Carol:)

Christopher Bunton

January 24, 2012 at 4:30 PM

Congratulations

Dan Kearley

January 24, 2012 at 2:04 PM

Congrats! On the win with this fine write. :o)

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 24, 2012 at 1:44 PM

Thank you and congrats to you also. Love, Carol

Jay Loveless

January 24, 2012 at 11:15 AM

Beautiful (: I love it

M.I.A .

January 20, 2012 at 1:07 AM

aaaww, this is a beautiful senryu. a winner for me. good luck Carol

Poet Destroyer A

January 18, 2012 at 8:27 PM

ha ha! here i am bothering you one more time.. i want this dream land to.... in a world of peace,, i won't have no more tears.... thank you for sharing your wonderful poems... ta ta ta,..p.d.