Line Gauthier Poet Personification

My Dove

Lovely mourning dove of my dreams
I long for you with all my heart
Cannot bear to be apart
Be we together surfing moon beams
Or soaring high chasing sun rays 
Manoeuvering playfully in the sky
In pursuit of every butterfly
I need you all my nights and days
Forever darling I will be true
My heart to you I surrender
Tell me at least I’m a contender
I offer only true love entre nous



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

Submitted on November 9, 2017 for contest LOVE LETTER sponsored by VIV WIGLEY  -  RANKED 6TH

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Suzanne Delaney November 15, 2017 at 8:28 AM Congratulations Line: We had doves in Hawaii and now we have moved away, we don’t. I kind of miss the sounds. A nice love poem. SuZ Line Gauthier November 15, 2017 at 10:21 AM Thanks for your visit, SuZ. Bet you got lots of inspiration from Hawaii.

James Inman November 14, 2017 at 3:36 AM Ahh, a gentle lovely write Line. I was pointing out a morning dove to someone just yesterday. Although... I used to have one cooing outside my window at 5am and it used to drive me crazy!! lol Line Gauthier November 14, 2017 at 8:06 PM Thanks for your visit, James. Just ask nicely for your mornings to be respected. ;-)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart November 13, 2017 at 7:45 PM Lovely! I just adore the mourning doves and do a fabulous rendition of their coo too :) Congratulations! xomo Line Gauthier November 13, 2017 at 8:45 PM Thank you, Maureen. Much appreciated. Line xx

Jan Allison November 13, 2017 at 7:02 PM Congrats on your win in the contest Line:-) hugs Jan xx Line Gauthier November 13, 2017 at 8:45 PM Thanks, Jan. Much appreciated.

Mike Gentile November 13, 2017 at 8:05 AM Congratulations, Line xxoo Line Gauthier November 13, 2017 at 8:45 PM Thanks, Mike. Have an awesome week!

Viv Wigley November 13, 2017 at 6:32 AM Well done, Line, a lovely write. Thanks for entering my contest. Regards, Viv Line Gauthier November 13, 2017 at 3:41 PM Thanks, Viv. That was a wonderful contest. Thoroughly enjoyed participating.

Subimal Sinha-Roy November 12, 2017 at 11:37 PM Congratulations, Line on your placement. Line Gauthier November 13, 2017 at 6:13 AM Thank you, Subimal. Have an awesome week!