My Dove

Lovely mourning dove of my dreams I long for you with all my heart Cannot bear to be apart Be we together surfing moon beams Or soaring high chasing sun rays Manoeuvering playfully in the sky In pursuit of every butterfly I need you all my nights and days Forever darling I will be true My heart to you I surrender Tell me at least I’m a contender I offer only true love entre nous AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on November 9, 2017 for contest LOVE LETTER sponsored by VIV WIGLEY - RANKED 6TH

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Suzanne Delaney

Date: 11/15/2017 8:28:00 AM

Congratulations Line: We had doves in Hawaii and now we have moved away, we don’t. I kind of miss the sounds. A nice love poem. SuZ

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/15/2017 10:21:00 AM

Thanks for your visit, SuZ. Bet you got lots of inspiration from Hawaii.

James Inman

Date: 11/14/2017 3:36:00 AM

Ahh, a gentle lovely write Line. I was pointing out a morning dove to someone just yesterday. Although... I used to have one cooing outside my window at 5am and it used to drive me crazy!! lol

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/14/2017 8:06:00 PM

Thanks for your visit, James. Just ask nicely for your mornings to be respected. ;-)