My Doggy Toy

I was a child of not more than nine.
Just one toy I wanted so very bad.
Wanted a doggy toy, I towed the line.
I knew if I didn’t get it, I would be sad.

The dog you see would swallow a ball.
Roll up his tongue, into mouth then caught.
A dog with a trick, no feeding, not bad at all,
This doggy would wag his tail, which I sought.

I crawled out of bed, early Christmas morn.
My parents told me, it’s too early you see.
I went back to bed, waited, as I’d sworn.
If I did not listen, nothing would be under tree.

My anticipation was so rampant, for this toy.
When I returned to open, presents at eight,
Tearing paper, checking, for my inner joy.
However, to my surprise, no doggy was my fate.

My sadness was real, my heart crushed today.
Though thankful, for what I had anyway,
We prepared to go to grandma’s house in zest.
Upon arrival, seeing my toy, this day was the best.



Written for

Sponsor Linda-Marie The Sweetheart of P.S. 
Contest Name "TOYLAND"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 4:55 AM
Congratulations Cecil on your win in the "Toyland" contest by Linda-Marie. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 4:51 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Linda, cecil
Onclaud Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 3:29 AM
great write! applause to you on your win :) nette
Dietrich Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 10:01 PM
Hey, you got it after all. how cool. I don't recall this toy dog on the market. I would like one of those too if I were a kid. Congratulations on your win, cecil!
Sweetheart Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 5:07 PM
Congrats Cecil on your success in my Toyland contest ...my winners list just posted tonight luv..
Sweetheart Avatar
December 23, 2010 at 8:27 PM
thankxxx for supporting my current contest Cecil.. good luck and happy holidays with luv,
Mehta Avatar
December 15, 2010 at 5:52 AM
Nice childhood memories of the Toy well penned, cecil. Good luck
Onclaud Avatar
December 15, 2010 at 2:49 AM
dlieghted by the suprisng elment of your piece; very imaginative, cecil.. wishing you a winning streak in linda's contest! huggs, nette
Poet Avatar
December 15, 2010 at 1:58 AM
Beautiful write.Reminded me of my childhood days-kashinath
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