My Doggy Toy

I was a child of not more than nine.
Just one toy I wanted so very bad.
Wanted a doggy toy, I towed the line.
I knew if I didn’t get it, I would be sad.

The dog you see would swallow a ball.
Roll up his tongue, into mouth then caught.
A dog with a trick, no feeding, not bad at all,
This doggy would wag his tail, which I sought.

I crawled out of bed, early Christmas morn.
My parents told me, it’s too early you see.
I went back to bed, waited, as I’d sworn.
If I did not listen, nothing would be under tree.

My anticipation was so rampant, for this toy.
When I returned to open, presents at eight,
Tearing paper, checking, for my inner joy.
However, to my surprise, no doggy was my fate.

My sadness was real, my heart crushed today.
Though thankful, for what I had anyway,
We prepared to go to grandma’s house in zest.
Upon arrival, seeing my toy, this day was the best.



Written for

Sponsor Linda-Marie The Sweetheart of P.S. 
Contest Name "TOYLAND"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 1/5/2011 4:55:00 AM
Congratulations Cecil on your win in the "Toyland" contest by Linda-Marie. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/4/2011 4:51:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Linda, cecil
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Date: 1/4/2011 3:29:00 AM
great write! applause to you on your win :) nette
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Date: 1/3/2011 10:01:00 PM
Hey, you got it after all. how cool. I don't recall this toy dog on the market. I would like one of those too if I were a kid. Congratulations on your win, cecil!
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Date: 1/3/2011 5:07:00 PM
Congrats Cecil on your success in my Toyland contest ...my winners list just posted tonight luv..
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Date: 12/23/2010 8:27:00 PM
thankxxx for supporting my current contest Cecil.. good luck and happy holidays with luv,
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Date: 12/15/2010 5:52:00 AM
Nice childhood memories of the Toy well penned, cecil. Good luck
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Date: 12/15/2010 2:49:00 AM
dlieghted by the suprisng elment of your piece; very imaginative, cecil.. wishing you a winning streak in linda's contest! huggs, nette
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Date: 12/15/2010 1:58:00 AM
Beautiful write.Reminded me of my childhood days-kashinath
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