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My Destiny In Life

Loneliness leads to searching, While searching shifts to looking, Looking then leads to thinking, From thinking comes the thoughts. Thoughts then become feelings, The feelings become urges, The urges transform to words. The words move into action, My actions lead into my habits, The habits become a pattern, The pattern becomes a trait, The trait adds to my qualities, The qualities outline my character, My character leads to my destiny in life. My destiny in life is to love you, Totally and endlessly...forevermore. ____________________________ Inspired by Kristin Reynolds' Love Me Tender-A Contest of Love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/18/2009 11:26:00 PM
Like the way the words fall into place. -Boo
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Date: 2/18/2009 1:47:00 AM
Good luck in the contest, I like the word play in this one boiling down to a great meaning. Tyler
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Date: 2/11/2009 2:59:00 PM
Nice way of channeling the words down, Great job. DN
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Date: 2/10/2009 9:34:00 PM
Wow, nice work on this one.
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Date: 2/5/2009 9:06:00 PM
This is wonderful, Raul. I love the way this poem flows. It is beautiful and a wonderful entry for the contest. Thank you for all your support, my friend. Love, Robin
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Date: 2/4/2009 8:33:00 AM
Wow. You are so creative Raul. A magnificent love poem. Lucky lady. And good luck to you! Love, Shar
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Date: 2/3/2009 6:55:00 PM
Wow, your the man! This is great and wouldnt any woman want to recieve this! BG
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Date: 2/3/2009 5:36:00 PM
Yes she does Raul!..lol..she knows its all in fun...Thanks for the comments.
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Date: 2/3/2009 4:27:00 PM
This is such a wonderful love poem my friend..wishing all the best in the contest.
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Date: 2/3/2009 4:10:00 PM
A very sweet and beautiful dedication of love...sincere and heart-felt. Best wishes, Sara:)
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Date: 2/3/2009 3:33:00 PM
This is soooo good, and what valentine could resist, I had rather have a poem like this than chocolates...wonderful, and sweet, always, Christy
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Date: 2/3/2009 3:11:00 PM
Whoa, well thought out and a very original write. I really like Raul. Laurie
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