My Deepest Love

I feel her closeness, her heart beat, it
is the breeze that calmly wisps across
a field, kissing the tree tops.

I know she is around, her energy brings
me happiness as she relaxes next to me
in my thoughts uniting with her, heart, 
soul, mind we merge, we combine our
freshness, together and roll around heaven
in delight.

She is my mother, my universe, my realm of
reality. She knows the freshness that keeps me
free, wilderness that roams wild in my veins
surrounds me with contentment, leaving her
mark upon my heart, to continue wanting her
to remain close to me in spirit, bringing me 
understanding that nature is God breathing
freshness, within and out of our souls, trying
to make us realize we can shine our own light
toward all mankind.

I feel her with me always, hear her songs when
the sun shines through my window, I know when
she wants me to walk upon the cool soft grass
when her breeze blows through the tree
by my front door, softly saying! ”Come
out and play with me”.

In joy I dance upon her grass soft and moist
I walk hand and hand with her, while she
whispers in my ear saying sweet nothings of
how she wished all man kind, would understand
and love her as I do.

I shall always feel her heartbeat, her soft breeze
of love whispering nothings in my ear, and will
never stop understanding why God sent her here
for all of us to love.

(Mother is my love, heartbeat, my freedom)


©DerenaBree (All rights reserved)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 12/3/2022 5:58:00 AM
Beautifully written piece. Mothers are very special and I miss my mom every day. Congrats on being a Lifetime Premium member.
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Date: 12/2/2022 7:52:00 AM
Mothers are special, and you have captured the emotion..Thanks! Charles
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Date: 12/2/2022 7:38:00 AM
Long time since I lost my mum, but do think often of her, and my dad and my stepdad and stepmother. Nicely written, Harriet.
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Date: 11/18/2022 7:26:00 AM
Beautifully written! Intelligent! Well done!
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