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August 28, 2023    8.49pm

My Dearest Boyfriend

My dearest boyfriend asked me what I like
I said, just a new apple mac book, Mike
At nearby mall there he went
And his money were all spent
Just for a book, three apples and girl’s bike.
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Goldsmith Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 8:11 PM
Congratulations on your win. A fun Limerick write. I enjoyed reading this fun read. Have a great/fun day writing away...............
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October 1, 2023 at 9:40 PM
Thank you so much for reading my poem, your uplifting words and your congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Paula. May God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Fowler Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 6:52 AM
LOL Clever Len! Congratulations! :)
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October 1, 2023 at 9:39 PM
Thank you so much for reading my poem, your uplifting comments and congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Linda. May God bless you always and your writngs. Hugs
Gasun Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 9:50 PM
A Fruity and Funny Limerick Contest Judged: 9/3/2023 2:06:00 PM Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin Place 4 ( up to 5th multi-w)
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September 3, 2023 at 4:54 PM
Len, a creative one, congratulations on your winning placement!
Gasun Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 8:37 PM
Thank you so much for acknowledging my poem in your contest my dear poet friend Tania. Your approval on my poem through my win means a lot to me. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
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August 29, 2023 at 12:04 AM
Lucky you Len….funny sweet poem! Debx
Gasun Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 8:29 PM
Thank you my dear poem friend Deb, but luckier if he's a good listener ha ha ha. Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting words. God bless you always and your writings. Sorry for the late expression of gratitude. Hugs
Allison Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 3:44 PM
You made me smile thanks Len:-) hugs jan xx
Gasun Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 8:21 PM
I'm glad it made you smile my dear poet friend Jan. Thank you so much again for reading my poem and your uplifting comments. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Andresen Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 9:34 AM
- Thank you for bringing smiles, dear friend :))) - hugs
Gasun Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 8:08 PM
YOu're much welcome my dear poet friend Anne-Lise. I thank you more for reading my poem. I'm glad it made you smiles. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Bowring Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 9:20 AM
Dear Len, your delightful limerick made me smile so much my friend! I had to read it several times and each time I laughed. Tom’ s comment made me giggle too! An endearing poem from endearing you! Thank you so much for bringing light and smiles to my day! Hugs to you.xx
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September 4, 2023 at 8:01 PM
Thank you so much my dear poet friend Christina for reading and enjoying my poem. I'm glad it made you laugh. Welcome my dear poet friend by I thank you more. Sorry for the late expression of gratitude. But so grateful more than words can say. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
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