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I held her cold hand She silently slipped away I sank into tears Her gift is on the table I wrapped it myself, today. Bite Size Poem No. 13

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/5/2025 7:09:00 AM
today I held her cold hand as she quietly slipped away. Tears filled my eyes, overwhelming me. Her gift sits on the table, a final gesture. I took the time to wrap it myself today.
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Date: 3/26/2016 10:35:00 PM
Jonathan Bellmann, you've expressed yourself well, I like the way you ended the poem. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry when you have time. Happy Easter ** LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/12/2013 4:42:00 PM
Really leaves one wondering what happened....awesome win...
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Date: 12/12/2013 3:51:00 PM
Johnathon, the last line is the one that really struck me. So poignant!! Congrats for your win.
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Date: 12/12/2013 8:30:00 AM
Congrats on your win. This packs a punch. Your sadness seeps into all hearts.
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Date: 11/29/2013 11:03:00 PM
Sad and gripping! Nice Tanka Jonathan.
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