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April-18-2025
Mother's Day Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Benjamin Bartley

 

Wrapped round in swaddling clothes, I saw her bright beaming face. Lying helpless, still in a trance, I sensed her soft soothing touch. Warm it was when huddled tight, Glad it was to be held close, Pleasure it was to be lifted up, And Heaven it was to be in her lap. She took me in her caring hands, She fed me with her nourishing milk, She made me sleep with lullabies sweet, And kept alert on day and night. As time slowly glided past, I grew fast into a tiny tot. Crawled around in sweeping haste, Reaching out to all I could touch. It left my mother so hardly pressed. She never had even time to sit, Cut down she, her afternoon nap, Cast aside she, her rest and respite. My teething time – a real hard time! For reasons none, I grew so irritable. Itchy – fidgety, I cried on end, Futile it went all her tricks to tame. It made my mother grow jittery. Consulted she every quack and doc, Administered she every harmless dope, And interceded to all divine help. It was only a passing phase, With consistent care, I grew to a buxom babe. My childish pranks delighted all. Too glad grew my mother to see me fare. Soon I learnt to steady myself up, The Toddler placed the first faltering steps. It was always with bated breath, My mother watched my growing up. She ever remained a pillar of strength, In who I saw, a never- failing friend. She led me through the devious turns of life, Always there to lend her helping hand. Wise it was to seek her counsel – In complex issues too hard to solve, Sane and sound, she ever remained. To trials of life, she never surrendered. She taught me the quintessence of life, She showed me the route to tread, Her zest for life, never once ceased, Her trust in God ever on the rise. Now my mother ceases to exist, But sure she will continue to live, In my heart, she reigns supreme. No force on Earth can cast her out. As I look back to days of yore, All I wish is to conjure up the past, To be reborn a second time, To be my mother’s darling child!

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Date: 4/21/2025 1:19:00 PM
Your affection and unrelenting affection for your mother are beautifully expressed in this poem, Valsa. It is truly moving and reassuring to read how you have presented your feelings about her. Your eloquent spirit is a caring and perceptive one, and it shines through in your poetry. Mothers are the rock upon which every family depends, and your dedication to her is magnificent.
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Date: 4/19/2025 6:42:00 AM
I here you; I cannot look at a plate (men and their stomachs) of Eggplant Parmesan without recalling Mon's loyal commitment to family -- Love went into every dish, really. Mother is 24/7. No weekend of golfing. Blessings my friend. Lovely, respectful write. Immeasurable pure love are mothers. Your were greatly Blessed with such a forever bonding relationship.
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Date: 4/19/2025 5:59:00 AM
This is so heartfelt and so sincere dear sweet valsa, i can get a glimpse of what your mother was like for you as you dear poetic soul is s kind empathetic soul that spreads light even here through poetry and comments, and this poem how youv expressed gratitude and unconditional love for her is beyond touching and warm to the heart to read too! I loved the ending the most! “ to be born again” how beautiful! Youv written a tribute that is so very poetic and so detailed and one that i felt! Best wishes! Sending you light always
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Date: 4/18/2025 2:43:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your lovely "My Dear Mother" write. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a wonderful spring day and Blessed Easter.........
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Date: 4/18/2025 11:58:00 AM
A beautiful tribute to your Mother Valsa, they are the bedrock of every family. Tom
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Date: 4/18/2025 11:20:00 AM
- Like so many mothers, Valsa - Does everything for her children - A loving mother will always be loved ... and missed - "No force on Earth can cast her out" - A wonderful poem :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 4/18/2025 10:41:00 AM
Nice Mother's day poem. It is loving and ffectionate.
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