My Dear Friends Kept Me Alive

A one and a two and a three four five.
I was dead, now I’m more than half alive.
I had given up; I had lost my jive.
I was hopeless, helpless, self-magnified.

I picked myself up with my dear friends help.
They believed in me, dug me out of kelp.
They rinsed me off. I was a sorry whelp.
I screamed a bit after the initial yelp.

If they had not believed I could
It would have been hard, it truly would.
They surrounded me as saviors should
Full of spiritual caring and lots of good.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Amankwah Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 8:34 AM
Good to have friends around. I specially like how you ended the poem; the solace it brings, They surrounded me as saviors should Full of spiritual caring and LOTS OF GOOD.' So much more than words can express. I love this poem.
Krutsinger Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 8:58 PM
It is wonderful to have friends who CARE, many of them are on this particular poetry site.
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