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As the wind grew, and the clouds rolled in, the droplets of rain hit my page. I continued to write. Nothing was going to stop me. I, was going to finish. It started to rain harder. thunder cracked, and lightning flashed. Soon, my writing was smudged. As I continued to write, a thought came to mind. Was this the life I had wanted? Or was I just a puppet, in the hands of someone else? I had finished, and just in time. My world grew dark. I knew this was the end. I had written my will, as I knew this day had come. It was time for me to go, and leave it all behind. I, was done here.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/11/2012 1:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Cindy. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/16/2012 12:45:00 AM
Very well Cindy.... i love this piece
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Date: 8/25/2011 2:32:00 PM
very good in its prospective of recognition to what is to come. Jim
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Cindy Smith
Date: 1/15/2012 8:37:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 8/23/2011 11:52:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your creative poetry tonight.. enjoy the site with its many features as u share words with luv..
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Cindy Smith
Date: 1/15/2012 8:37:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 8/23/2011 7:17:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Cindy. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Cindy Smith
Date: 1/15/2012 8:37:00 PM
Thank you.