Fin Chuuk Poet Free verse

My Daughter

I’ve never deeply experienced love and joy
Until; that stinkin’ cute baby girl with golden hair
Big round steel blue eyes and fairest skin
Took my breath away the instant I held her

The joy that fills me nothing can compare 
That magical moment became my favorite 
That parental instinct just became naturally fitting 
My walls of protecting her sprang right up 

To have her in my life is the greatest gift of all
She didn’t just complete me
She is the every essence of my purpose 
My everything beautiful, rain and shine

My girl 
My daughter 



Fin Chuuk
2/24/2023

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Speaks Volumes July 20, 2023 at 1:42 AM This is so beautiful. I miss you Fin

Marikate Kingston April 6, 2023 at 7:22 PM Lovely, just simply lovely. I am the mother of two daughters. After I pat my tears, I would like call them and read it to them over the phone with your permission. It is a beautiful poem and your last stanza is my favorite. Fin Chuuk April 7, 2023 at 2:18 PM Marikate, you honored me. Thank you so much. You just made my day, and I greatly appreciate it. :)

Paige Hind March 22, 2023 at 11:13 AM This is so beautiful!! I can picture her in your arms, a bundle of blessings! Fin Chuuk March 22, 2023 at 9:04 PM Paige, you’re so sweet, thank you so very much. :)

Panagiota Romios March 16, 2023 at 3:04 PM Just a perfect write Fin.I have several writes about my daughter. And grandson. Of course, am older than you, and have watched her create a miraculous life for herself….her son is like her. Gifted and caring, she chose the perfect husband as well. Put herself through college.was elected to public office. Decided not to run for the house of Rep. but very active polically. She’s a mothers miracle!a joy to her husband and son. Pangie xo Panagiota Romios April 13, 2023 at 9:56 PM I forgot to FAV This,,, Pangie 4/13/2023 Fin Chuuk March 16, 2023 at 7:56 PM Hello Pangie, it’s always a wonderful feeling when your kid is doing great in life. Such blessing we must appreciate always. Thank you so much my dear friend, and may you have a fabulous weekend. Hugs ~ Fin

Andrea Dietrich March 15, 2023 at 3:45 PM How I wish I had had this in my life. I envy daddy girls!! Fin Chuuk March 15, 2023 at 6:40 PM Awe, I’m sorry Andrea. I wish you had it too. All the best to you. Hugs ~ Fin

Sara Kendrick March 14, 2023 at 11:09 AM Yes, children are a wonderful gift from God, but, of course, we have a trying times as well. Thank your for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara Fin Chuuk March 14, 2023 at 11:21 AM Hello Sara, it’s always a pleasure to read your sweet and kind comments. I greatly appreciate you, my dear poetess friend :)

Swetha Vangaveti March 14, 2023 at 10:44 AM Daughters are a blessing! They bring immense joy into the house! The house of bricks suddenly turns into a home of love with their arrival! You have captured the beauty of having a daughter so well. Fin Chuuk March 14, 2023 at 10:51 AM Hello, Swetha, so nice to meet you and how sweet is your comment. Makes me smile. :)

Paula Goldsmith March 14, 2023 at 8:41 AM A beautiful write. This would make a great card/gift. I wish you would write more. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away.............. Fin Chuuk March 14, 2023 at 9:30 AM Paula, you honored me with your kind and sweet comment. I greatly appreciate it. Thank you very much.

D.W. Rodgers March 14, 2023 at 6:21 AM Too true and thevsame almost applies to boys. Fin Chuuk March 14, 2023 at 7:04 AM Yes of course the same as boys. Thank you, D.W

Joanna Daniel March 14, 2023 at 1:27 AM A feeling nothing else can compete with, Fin, lovely poem:) Fin Chuuk March 14, 2023 at 7:03 AM Very true my dear. Thank you so much :)

Beryl Edmonds March 13, 2023 at 7:46 PM That’s so lovely Fin, you’re truly blessed to have a lovely daughter… Belle Fin Chuuk March 14, 2023 at 7:02 AM Thank you so much, Belle :)

Speaks Volumes March 11, 2023 at 9:26 PM Such a lovely Poem Fin. Your love shines through every word. Fin Chuuk March 12, 2023 at 8:27 PM Wendy, thank you for coming by and this lovely comment. Greatly appreciated :)

Darlene De Beaulieu March 7, 2023 at 11:46 AM Hello Fin, a mother and daughter have a strong bond. Which will last a life time. Enjoy your day my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu March 8, 2023 at 10:09 AM Hello Fin, I hope you are having a nice day. Yes mother and daughter do hope you are having a nice day.Enjoy your day my friend. Fin Chuuk March 7, 2023 at 7:51 PM Thank you Darlene, and yes we do :)

Andrea Dietrich March 4, 2023 at 10:30 PM I wish my dad had felt the same for his daughters. This is so nice. Fin Chuuk March 5, 2023 at 4:08 PM Awe, I’m sorry to hear that, Andrea. I didn’t meet mine until I was much older. But he was definitely happy to have me. :)

Susan Lawrence March 4, 2023 at 12:28 PM Your words resonate deeply inside my soul dear Fin . I felt the same way when my firstborn my daughter came into this life and I held her in my arms . Nothing compares . Beautiful poem ! Blessings, Susan :) Fin Chuuk March 4, 2023 at 1:56 PM Sure is nothing compares. Thank you so much, Susan for this beautiful comment I truly appreciate it :)

Valsa George March 3, 2023 at 10:20 PM I have two boys. It was after years of waiting, they came to us as late arrivals. I had always wanted a daughter. I know a daughter makes a mother's life complete . May God bless your daughter, dear Fin Fin Chuuk March 4, 2023 at 1:55 PM Funny, I’ve always wanted a boy. Never happen… I guess, we’ll just have to take what’s given to us and be appreciative. Thank you, Valsa :)

Joe Maverick March 2, 2023 at 10:50 AM A blessing to us all are the girls Fin..' Such a Gift and balance to the men of this world God bless them and keep them.' Fin Chuuk March 2, 2023 at 4:49 PM I agree with you, Joe :) Thank you and god bless you too.

Kim Rodrigues February 28, 2023 at 12:13 PM Beautiful! Poems hold our memories. They are cathartic. God bless you, Fin! Fin Chuuk March 1, 2023 at 8:40 PM Thank you so much, Kim. Hugs :)

Demetrios Trifiatis February 28, 2023 at 8:40 AM A marvelous ode to your daughter, my dear friend, Fin. The moment our children are born, our immortality is assured. Once I was in your position when I had my daughter who now has a daughter of her own. Pure magic. I wish your daughter health, happiness, and longevity! Wonderful writing! Be blessed. Fin Chuuk March 1, 2023 at 8:39 PM You gave my heart a smile with this lovely comment, my wise friend. Thank you :)

Charles Messina February 27, 2023 at 2:17 PM Lovely, Finn. The wonderful joy of life! It doesn't get any better. Beautiful write :) Charlie Fin Chuuk March 1, 2023 at 8:38 PM Thank you so much, Charlie :)

Anne-Lise Andresen February 27, 2023 at 5:33 AM - Beautiful written, Fin :) - This poem is perfect for my daughter and my feelings for her too - (I have only one child, who is grown... she has chosen to live without parents ... I haven't seen her in five years ... very sad ) - hugs Fin Chuuk March 1, 2023 at 8:38 PM My heart aches for you, Sunshine. I’m so sorry. I pray she will realize what life and love is without mom and dad. Keep strong my fair poet friend. Hugs

Paul Callus February 26, 2023 at 1:49 PM This is a delightful and heartfelt poem, Fin. Holding a baby for the first time after months of waiting is such a special moment for a mother. ~ Regards // paul Fin Chuuk February 26, 2023 at 7:39 PM It’s the magical moment, I firmly believe :)

Heidi Sands February 26, 2023 at 5:14 AM This gave me the chills, it is so special!!! Excellent. :) Fin Chuuk February 26, 2023 at 7:38 PM Aww, thank you, Heidi. God bless :)

Daniel Turner February 25, 2023 at 9:36 AM Beautiful heartfelt poem Fin. I have a daughter too and 2 sons. It's all good. Fin Chuuk February 25, 2023 at 2:03 PM I’m happy for you too, Danny :)

Vijay Pandit February 25, 2023 at 6:06 AM Straight from the heart of a father. She is the pride and joy. Beautiful poem, Fin. Much enjoyed the loving voice of your poem. Fin Chuuk February 25, 2023 at 2:02 PM Greatest feeling in the world. Thank you so much, Vijay. Greatly appreciate your sweet comment :)

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