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My Darling Valentine

Darling, take me in love’s tender embrace. Let me nestle close upon your shoulder. Being next to you is my perfect place. Sweetness, as our fingers now interlace I feel your kisses grow fiercely bolder. Darling, take me in love’s tender embrace. My Valentine, my eyes touch your sweet face. I submit my heart to you as holder. Being next to you is my perfect place. Your true love is mine by Heaven’s good grace. Our gold love glows more as we grow older. Darling, take me in love’s tender embrace. You are my every day, my secure base, And I, your soft committed beholder. Being next to you is my perfect place. Valentine, I cherish our loving pace. ~ My heart is your clay and you, its molder. ~ Darling, take me in love’s tender embrace. ~ Being next to you is my perfect place. ... CayCay Jennings February 4, 2016

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Date: 2/25/2016 11:17:00 AM
I love the concept of giving yourself completely to your Valentine, CayCay!
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Date: 2/25/2016 10:06:00 AM
Valentine Villanelles almost sweet as apple jelly now read on winners’ page..You are quite the sage..Sweet Congrats..Sara
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Date: 2/24/2016 3:42:00 PM
A very beautiful Valentine poem written so well, CayCay. Congratulations on your fine win.
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Date: 2/23/2016 9:55:00 PM
Wow a lovely poem Caycay.. no wonder a great win.. big congrats!
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Date: 2/23/2016 4:09:00 PM
CayCay, Congratulations on your "Valentine's Villanelle Challenge" have a nice day. ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/18/2016 8:58:00 AM
This is wonderful and lovely. Nice poetry here dear friend.
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Date: 2/14/2016 10:31:00 AM
Villanelle is a challenging form, CayCay, but you dealt with it with the confidence of an 'old' hand. I can feel the catchy flow and romantic vein; rhyme could have been a hindrance, but you coped effortlessly. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 2/4/2016 5:34:00 PM
This is such a sweet write, CayCay. The form fits the subject beautifully.
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Date: 2/4/2016 3:38:00 PM
CayCay, you wrote superbly your lines for this villanelle.They are not that easy to do and I think you met the challenge and succeeded. I really like this, sweetie.
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 2/4/2016 4:06:00 PM
Thanks for such an uplifting an encouraging response. I just love it! CayCay
Date: 2/4/2016 10:17:00 AM
You did such a wonderful job with this form, CayCay! Very romantic and lovely. I am sure it is a winner. Yes, my picture is a more recent one, and your new one is very pretty too! Hugs, Sandra
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 2/4/2016 11:13:00 AM
Thank you for both your poem comments and the compliment. Very sweet to hear - both things. All the best ... CayCay
Date: 2/4/2016 5:25:00 AM
A tenderly written Villanelle that certainly doesn't leave the heart unmoved, dearest CayCay! Good luck!
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 2/4/2016 6:17:00 AM
Thank you so much. The best to you ... CayCay
Date: 2/4/2016 4:00:00 AM
Villanelles take a little more concentration and effort, but you've nailed it, CayCay, and a loving piece it is, too. Will do well, I'm sure. Viv x
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 2/4/2016 4:15:00 AM
Your comments are very encouraging, upbeat and appreciated! Thank you, Viv ... CayCay
Date: 2/4/2016 3:56:00 AM
aww so romantic CayCay good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 2/4/2016 4:14:00 AM
Thank you, Sweetie. I'm hugging you back ... CayCay

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