My Darkest Childhood Memory-W

( This is a fictional write)


I was a short skinny seven year old boy growing in a town
Believed in fantasies of scary boogie to jolly old red man.
When dad took to see Santa, was worried about naughty list.
On Christmas Eve I went to bed early full with excitement.

Then heard a strange sound coming from the living room
Saw parents carrying toys placing them under the tree.
Returned to bed and where I silently cried myself to sleep.
As if was not enough heard the voices of parents fighting.

Saw Christmas tree torn, toys scattered and dad leaving.
Felt rejection, loneliness, physical and emotional abuse
It was awful and bitterly engrained still in my memory.
When the troubles come, come not single but in battalion.

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Sixth place win in:
Contest: My darkest childhood Memory sponsored by Walayee Whitlock
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 4:21 AM
Congratulations on your win Dr. Ram in the contest "My Darkest Childhood Memory"sponsored by Walayee (Lay). Love, Carol
Mannan Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 7:50 PM
This is very good poetry and dark experience. many congratulations.
Onclaud Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 7:00 AM
well done, dr. ram... HEADS UP to you for the great win! :) huggs, nette
Calhoun Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 5:41 AM
Hi Dr. Ram - Wow! This poem was heart wrentching also. Congratulations on your WIN in Walayee's contest. Best wishes, KC
Kendrick Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 1:36 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 1:31 PM
Congrats Dr. Ram on another brilliant win in Lay's contest with this excellent entry and eloquent write my friend.. touching piece ... enjoy another top ten victory with luv..
Devonshire Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 12:33 PM
Congratulations on your win in Lay's contest, Dr. Ram. This is one of the best I've seen for the contest. Love, Carolyn
Haick Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 12:01 PM
Congratulations on your win in Lay's Contest, Dr. Ram. Great story. Love, Annalise
Whitlock-Ishway Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 11:55 AM
Congrats Dr. Mehta! Lay
Neels Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 11:55 AM
Dr. Ram, congratulations on your win in Lay's DCM contest ;)
Ward Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 4:26 AM
A very sad thing to have to go through. So much feeling in your words. Thanks for the comment on my work...
Whitlock-Ishway Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 11:50 AM
Fact or fiction this is a painful picture Dr. Mehta. One that proves to be true for some... Lay
Campi Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 8:49 AM
This poem left a very heavy feeling in my heart. It was sad and so true in the lives of many a child. Thanks for sharing your work with us. Jancarl
Sweetheart Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 8:03 AM
Another awesome and amazing contest entry Dr. Ram.. u are extremely talented and sharing with us all leaves me breathless my friend as to the magnitude of your gift.. good luck with luv..
La France Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 7:18 AM
I felt the pain of that little boy, Ram, you captured that emotion that a child would feel, perfectly, glad to hear this is fiction~~
A  Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 8:19 PM
A DEEP ENTRY DR.RAM, THANKS FOR THE COMMENT. SAD! GOOD LUCK IN LAY'S CONTEST ~LUV~ SKAT
Onclaud Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 5:25 PM
mine is based on a friend's journey though i did emapthize with him.. a grim tale filled with strong inager, dr. ram... wishing you winning luck in the contest!.. hope you will enjoy my rispetto for you... the pleasure was mine! :) nette
Dietrich Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 2:56 PM
I guess one has to turn to fiction if he doesn' have a dark memory of his own. Dr. Ram, this contest was difficult for me . I had to just choose a bad dream I'd had! anyway, I like how you chose a child's memory of his first belief in Santa being shattered. You are very good at making your poems fit these contest topics, which is not an easy thing to do all the time! LUv , andrea
Kendrick Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 2:42 PM
This happens in so many children's lives and lives an emotional impact that never leaves them even though fictional work for you....Good luck in the contest..Reads like a sure winner to me..Thanks so much for the review of my work..Yes, Cinnamon Rolls would be on the vegetarian list..Sara
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January 9, 2011 at 2:04 PM
First this boy's faith in Santa was crushed and then he had to overhear his parents fighting on Christmas Eve. Truly a dark memory for any child. Best wishes for success in Lay's contest with this moving entry. Love, Carolyn
Fraser Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 12:40 PM
Elation to dissapointment Dr. Ram - It sure couldn't of been an easy time. Good luck in Walayee's contest....:)
Knop Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 10:32 AM
Yes indeed this story must be your darkest memory, Dr. Ram! But I wish you good luck in the contest though!...Gert
Austin Avatar
January 9, 2011 at 10:09 AM
Lost Santa and Pop too? Bummer! Love, Dave
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