My Dark Valentine

Dark, my heart,  that makes chocolate jealous
And I so sweet,  sugar refuses to melt.
Red, my blood, that makes cut roses cuss,
And I pierce my skin a welcomed welt.

My Valentine lovestruck kissing me like a queen,
And I prepare this love affair with tendrils unseen.
I take his taste upon my tongue, wear him like cologne,
Feed him his own vitriol to make him know he’s owned. 


Sharp, my eyes, dagger his soul with lies,
And I quicken my blade with awesome power.
Steel, my lips,with a sawblade disguise,
And I stand before him a thorny flower.

My Valentine starstruck melting in caustic rain,
dripping in my acidic tears and burning in my pain.
Spitting out the sarcasm, his words in my mouth vial
And all knew I hated him when our words went viral.

Torn, my heart, a matchstick from the cover,
and struck to ignition against the grain
Burned, my fingers, the touch of demon lover,
and I know it will always be the same refrain.

My Valentine bladestruck doubled over in bed
and I'm soaking up the fragments of him in my head.
Grinning at the lingering ghost that is tied to the post,
This years Valentine is the one that I love the most.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 1/29/2019 3:01:00 PM
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem. Beautiful imagery.
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Date: 2/17/2016 11:07:00 PM
Congrats on ur superb winning write Casarah.
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Date: 2/17/2016 8:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/17/2016 2:58:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win Casarah. You already know how much I liked this poem! #7
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Date: 2/17/2016 1:26:00 PM
Casarah,congratulations on your win!!!! Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/17/2016 1:14:00 PM
Hi Casarah, Congratulations on your placement in Skat's contest....Vlad.
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Date: 2/17/2016 10:25:00 AM
Casarah, congrats on your wonderful love poem. Thanks for Supporting a Skat Contest, while she is away. Love LINDA
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Date: 2/17/2016 8:44:00 AM
Casarah, thank you for the support. :) SK
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Date: 2/17/2016 8:01:00 AM
One might think that this beautiful poem was not written by a lovely lady as you but by a Black Widow! Haha! To tell you the truth dear Casarah a different picture had I in my mind of Valentines! hhahha! Glad though it was poem of the day! Congratulations!
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Date: 2/14/2016 9:21:00 PM
Congrats on poem of the day, well deserved my dark one!
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Date: 2/14/2016 6:39:00 PM
I agree with Connie. So dramatic with such impact it makes the hairs on my arm stand at attention. Elaine
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Date: 2/14/2016 2:45:00 PM
These are the kind of poems that publishers are looking for Casarah. You have that special talent that is innate. Congratulations on this wonderful poem being recognized for POTD. if not, I may have missed reading it and I am so glad I didn't! #7 ; )
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Date: 2/13/2016 6:33:00 PM
So deep and dark it was beautiful
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Date: 2/13/2016 6:13:00 PM
Wow! Sensual, erotic, and exotic. I can taste your words, as I lick my fingers.
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Date: 2/13/2016 4:20:00 PM
Casarah , Congratulations on Poem of the Day
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Date: 2/13/2016 2:28:00 PM
fantastique bravo on poem of day
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Date: 2/13/2016 2:13:00 PM
Hi Casarah: I am in awe of this deep intense valentine. Well written!
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Date: 2/13/2016 11:48:00 AM
Love this! The dark side of a Valentine -- like reading a Gothic novel! Congrats on POTD!! Cindi
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Date: 2/13/2016 11:36:00 AM
Congratulations on Poem of the Day, Casarah. Very dark and deep and creative. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/13/2016 11:07:00 AM
fabulously dark Cas:-) congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/13/2016 6:18:00 AM
- A fabulous poem (7), Casarah ! - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. !!!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/13/2016 6:10:00 AM
Grats on POTD
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Date: 2/12/2016 4:36:00 PM
Dark Gothic romance write, You have style sis xoxoxoxoxo peace
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Date: 2/12/2016 3:07:00 PM
Excellent, Casarah! I love it! I have enjoyed the creativity; dark beauty...something in which you excel! too many special phrases to mention all, which will linger in the mind...#7 ~ Dark warm regards ..... paul
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Date: 2/12/2016 2:11:00 PM
Dark and delicious! You have quite the flare with words my dear! Bravo!
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