My Dance Shoe

When I was, the age of twenty.
My dancing was admired plenty.
Only one dance shoe,
worked magic for you. 
Brown loafers with shiny penny

©  Feb 2011 for SKats "Favorite shoe"Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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November 7, 2011 at 10:30 PM
..CONGRATULATIONS ~ IN THE SHOE CONTEST... I THINK every title is aweome.. ;-) Have a wonderful NIGHT, GOD BLESS,..P.D.
Sweetheart Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 9:05 AM
Congrats Charles on a wonderful win in the Shoes contest with this excellent entry luv..
Taylor Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 8:36 AM
Congrats, Charles. Great write. Enjoyed. Nice going. All the best. Ralph
A  Avatar
November 6, 2011 at 10:37 PM
CHARLES~ SORRY ABOUT THE DELAY~ CONGRATULATIONS!~ in my shoe contest~LUV*SKAT
Guzzi Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 5:05 PM
I too remember penny loafers! Light & Love
Pettit Avatar
February 7, 2011 at 6:00 PM
Looks like a good candidate for the contest.
Dufresne Avatar
February 7, 2011 at 5:43 PM
nicely done Charles. seems a perfectly metered Limerick. Nice. Good luck in contest
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