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My Dance Partners - Visual 2

A gallant moon extends gold fingers to me on the dance floor as I slip my legs into the chorus line of tall, green grass with ease. Like a spiraling leaf, I’m free until eyes freeze upon his tracks.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/8/2015 1:29:00 AM
Dang, Rhonda. That is the danger in not seeing my friends' poems until after my contest is judged. I then am not aware to tell you that you forgot to enter it!!! So sorry. It definitely would have made the winners' list. great personification poem.
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Date: 2/5/2015 7:51:00 AM
the first line is so captivating wow.. :) lovely..! thanks for sharing. :)!
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Date: 2/4/2015 8:53:00 PM
Rhonda, such imaginative way to interpret this visual! Very lovely. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/1/2015 3:41:00 PM
What a wonderful way to describe this image...from the eye of a poet.
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Date: 1/30/2015 5:39:00 PM
Beautiful imagery Rhonda...hugs Tim
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Date: 1/30/2015 12:33:00 PM
Fantastic write Rhonda......best wishes
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Date: 1/30/2015 11:49:00 AM
Wonderful images here. You make the picture come to life!
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Date: 1/30/2015 10:47:00 AM
How beautiful this is !! so perfectly balanced with the romance of the picture !! Lovely entry, Rhonda!
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Date: 1/30/2015 2:46:00 AM
Love your interpretation of the theme - good luck in the contest a 7 from me:-) Hugs jan x
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Date: 1/30/2015 1:47:00 AM
Ohh Wow Visual #2 Rhonda what a poetic interpretation! God bless your "gold fingers". Love>rajat
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