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My Dad Taught Me To Drive Stick Shift

My Dad taught me to drive stick On warm Sunday mornings while Chicago slept Before the church people left and returned On a freeway still under construction Past yellow barricades and Caution signs Recklessly cautious Without benefit of power steering And power brakes We flew past run down homes And new skyscrapers We owned the road The lesson was simple Real drivers drive shift They control the car Balance clutch and gas Life requires our attention It demands our patience We advance slowly and carefully Real drivers drive shift And so we traveled Across a city still lazily stretching Not quite awake Down a freeway under construction On side streets and in parking lots We owned the city

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Date: 4/14/2023 8:45:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts about how your Dad taught you to drive through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you.
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Date: 4/14/2023 8:27:00 PM
A memory to always hold on too. At least you can carry the memory over with you once you ?, I mean we are to make immortal memories. Great write.
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Date: 3/19/2021 1:28:00 PM
Brilliant! I grew up not knowing my Dad. What a great memory and tribute to yours. :-)
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Date: 9/25/2020 7:48:00 PM
Hi and welcome, I am an ex Chicagoan and now live on the West Coast. Stick shift...uh huh.)) This is a very fine poem and well done. May you find some really good friends here. It's like a test drive. Not all are true or stand by. Just keep writing. Don't get hung up on comnents. Be you above all else,,that way you will own the road here. Honk Honk! Pangie xx
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Marie Wallace
Date: 11/12/2020 1:53:00 PM
Thank you This poem describes my experience learning to drive on the Dan Ryan expressway. I appreciate your comments
Date: 6/8/2016 1:38:00 AM
hope to see a new one from you again, Marie.. sk
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Marie Wallace
Date: 11/12/2020 1:54:00 PM
Thank you. I just posted Oklahoma, a poem that I wrote after Tim McVeigh bombed the Oklahoma city federal building
Date: 5/18/2016 1:12:00 AM
Marie, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead...........//:) hugs
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Date: 5/15/2016 1:04:00 AM
Marie,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Marie Wallace
Date: 11/12/2020 1:56:00 PM
I appreciate your feedback. Sorry my response is late. I had been traveling to three cities and working two jobs.
Date: 5/14/2016 10:19:00 PM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Marie. :)
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Marie Wallace
Date: 11/12/2020 1:57:00 PM
Thank you. I am late answering due to family issues. I appreciate your feedback
Date: 5/14/2016 3:38:00 PM
Marie,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Marie Wallace
Date: 11/12/2020 1:58:00 PM
Thank you. I am looking forward to reading your poems.

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