My Dad--The Horse Whisperer

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THIS VIDEO IS MY DAD AND HIS BELOVED HORSE ..."QUEENIE" 
FROM AN OLD HOME MOVIE RECENTLY FOUND. 
(I'm sorry for the less than perfect quality.
It was taken long ago, with an old movie camera, from "way back when")

 

~

                 A Timeless Connection

          Where can we find two better hemispheres 
          Without sharp north, without declining west?
          Whatever dies, was not mix’d equally;
          (From John Donne….."The Good-Morrow"


My dad held a presence, that was clearly outdone
by the stars in the heavens, this I confess…
Upstaged it may seem by other cowboys we've seen
on the stage, on the screen, in the movies, no less..   
But in spite of it all, we knew he was one …
                A star in the eyes to the ones who knew best…

He was a star in the eyes of this creature he loved
His "Queenie", beloved,  who learned from his touch
She trusted the whispers, the instinctual caress
of his hands, of his legs, and the click of a wrist
The tug of a rein or the touch of a wisp
She would bow down, adore him and then softly obey,
to please him, appease him,  while he in return…
would love her, so gently….his trust always earned

And all through those days as they stirred up the dust,
the sun would smile down until it would rest
And on the horizon when the sun would be gone….
my Dad and his queen would blend into one
                                                
                                         ~

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May they be stirring up heavenly dust together…..
                 Dad and 'Queenie'.....united forever
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3/1/18

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 3/2/2018 6:45:00 PM
wow, Carrie. I saw part of this video too and the amazing way your dad had with Queenie. Your dad cut quite the striking figure. I love the note you left at the bottom as well as this beautiful poem. Stirring up heavenly dust forever. How wonderful. (the music on the video still playing . You chose such a cool tune)
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Date: 3/2/2018 2:40:00 PM
A beautiful touching tribute, they call me the rabbit whisperer lol... Have you seen the movie or read the book called horse whisperer?
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Date: 3/2/2018 2:49:00 PM
Thank you, Silent One ! Yes, I love that Robert Redford movie, and read the book as well.... Both are favorites, and made me think of my Dad while watching !! (And I love rabbits! Had a couple when I was a child..! They can make great pets! :)
Date: 3/2/2018 1:14:00 PM
That was a really cool video, complete command and very relaxed, you dear poet are very fortunate to have a dad like this...
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