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My Curious Kitten

My lovely kitten laps up milk
I stroke her fur it’s as smooth as silk


Fluffy espies butterflies with delight
she wants to play, paws reach out -
her new friends fly away!


She clambers upon the garden wall
loses her footing, I watch her fall
Meowing loudly I hear her call
next minute, she’s chasing her new ball!


curious kitten
frolics in the summer sun …
poppies sway in breeze

nature themes, kitten, garden, butterflies


Writing Challenge - Nature, Four in One - Poetry Contest

Sponsored by Constance La France

09/13/20

Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2020

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Constance La France Date: 9/29/2020 1:28:00 PM Jan, congratulations on your win in my Nature Four in One Challenge with this wonderful write, a FAV for me, I love your image too _Constance Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/21/2020 7:03:00 AM - Congratulations on your win, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Caren Krutsinger Date: 9/15/2020 1:07:00 PM She sounds marvelous; this is a winner in any contest. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/15/2020 2:34:00 PM thanks Caren:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/15/2020 4:57:00 AM - A wonderful poem ... that will charm Constance's heart :) - Best wishes in the contest, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/15/2020 8:10:00 AM thanks Anne-Lise:-) hugs jan xx

Rico Leffanta Date: 9/14/2020 11:54:00 AM No one has yet observed what a nice write you have done despite your allergy! Aloha! Rico Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/14/2020 2:47:00 PM aww thanks Rico that comments means a lot:-) hugs jan xx

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 9/14/2020 10:02:00 AM Your kitten is just too lovely my friend. We have never had a cat, but neighbors of ours have one and it has adopted us, also a a very cute cat, a tabby. This poem is beautiful - good luck Jan. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/14/2020 2:44:00 PM thanks Jennifer its pure fiction I'm afraid... I have not pets I have an allergy to animal fur:-) hugs jan xx

Duke Beaufort Date: 9/14/2020 3:37:00 AM Nice to be a new cat. Very playful. Fun to watch indeed!! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/14/2020 2:43:00 PM pure fiction Duke, so good to see you back:-) hugs jan xx

Victor Buhagiar Date: 9/14/2020 2:06:00 AM You rose to this challenge with great ideas. Best for a win. ~~ Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/14/2020 2:41:00 PM thanks Victor it was fun:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper Date: 9/13/2020 8:39:00 PM Marvelous poem, I do know Constance will love it. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/14/2020 2:41:00 PM i hope she likes it Eve:-) hugs jan xx

Michelle Faulkner Date: 9/13/2020 8:02:00 PM Kittens are so mischievous, it's a delight to watch them play - reads like a winner to me! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/14/2020 10:57:00 AM thanks Michelle they are fun to watch:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/13/2020 6:25:00 PM I can hear her meowing. My grandson has his minecraft world filled with meowing kittens. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/14/2020 10:56:00 AM Thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May Date: 9/13/2020 4:43:00 PM Very nicely penned Jan, best wishes, hugs Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/14/2020 10:52:00 AM thanks Joseph:-) hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer Date: 9/13/2020 4:37:00 PM lovely imagery, jan! best of luck in the contest... Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/14/2020 10:52:00 AM thanks Ilene:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/13/2020 2:21:00 PM You did wonderfully with the themes here, Jan. Were we required to say which nature items we drew on? I still have not posted mine. I have about six poems yet unposted! Hope you are enjoying the day. Joe gets home early now on Sunday and I still have ten more poets I need to read. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 9/13/2020 3:55:00 PM thanks Andrea its so nice to tackle forms I seldom write, i'm not sure if stating the themes is a requirement but i thought I would do it:-) hugs jan xx