Jan Allison Poet Monorhyme

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My Curious Kitten

My lovely kitten laps up milk
I stroke her fur it’s as smooth as silk


Fluffy espies butterflies with delight
she wants to play, paws reach out -
her new friends fly away!


She clambers upon the garden wall
loses her footing, I watch her fall
Meowing loudly I hear her call
next minute, she’s chasing her new ball!


curious kitten
frolics in the summer sun …
poppies sway in breeze

nature themes, kitten, garden, butterflies


Writing Challenge - Nature, Four in One - Poetry Contest

Sponsored by Constance La France

09/13/20

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Constance La France September 29, 2020 at 1:28 PM Jan, congratulations on your win in my Nature Four in One Challenge with this wonderful write, a FAV for me, I love your image too _Constance

Anne-Lise Andresen September 21, 2020 at 7:03 AM - Congratulations on your win, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Caren Krutsinger September 15, 2020 at 1:07 PM She sounds marvelous; this is a winner in any contest. Jan Allison September 15, 2020 at 2:34 PM thanks Caren:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen September 15, 2020 at 4:57 AM - A wonderful poem ... that will charm Constance's heart :) - Best wishes in the contest, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison September 15, 2020 at 8:10 AM thanks Anne-Lise:-) hugs jan xx

Rico Leffanta September 14, 2020 at 11:54 AM No one has yet observed what a nice write you have done despite your allergy! Aloha! Rico Jan Allison September 14, 2020 at 2:47 PM aww thanks Rico that comments means a lot:-) hugs jan xx

Jennifer Proxenos September 14, 2020 at 10:02 AM Your kitten is just too lovely my friend. We have never had a cat, but neighbors of ours have one and it has adopted us, also a a very cute cat, a tabby. This poem is beautiful - good luck Jan. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Jan Allison September 14, 2020 at 2:44 PM thanks Jennifer its pure fiction I'm afraid... I have not pets I have an allergy to animal fur:-) hugs jan xx

Duke Beaufort September 14, 2020 at 3:37 AM Nice to be a new cat. Very playful. Fun to watch indeed!! Jan Allison September 14, 2020 at 2:43 PM pure fiction Duke, so good to see you back:-) hugs jan xx

Victor Buhagiar September 14, 2020 at 2:06 AM You rose to this challenge with great ideas. Best for a win. ~~ Jan Allison September 14, 2020 at 2:41 PM thanks Victor it was fun:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper September 13, 2020 at 8:39 PM Marvelous poem, I do know Constance will love it. Jan Allison September 14, 2020 at 2:41 PM i hope she likes it Eve:-) hugs jan xx

Michelle Faulkner September 13, 2020 at 8:02 PM Kittens are so mischievous, it's a delight to watch them play - reads like a winner to me! Jan Allison September 14, 2020 at 10:57 AM thanks Michelle they are fun to watch:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues September 13, 2020 at 6:25 PM I can hear her meowing. My grandson has his minecraft world filled with meowing kittens. Jan Allison September 14, 2020 at 10:56 AM Thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Panagiota Romios September 13, 2020 at 5:36 PM Utterly beautiful, Jan....great imagery! Best wishes for a top win))))!M Hugs to a sweet Poetess! Pangie xx Jan Allison September 14, 2020 at 10:55 AM Thanks Pangie i wish i could have a cat but i'm allergic to animal fur:-) hugs jan xx

Joseph May September 13, 2020 at 4:43 PM Very nicely penned Jan, best wishes, hugs Jan Allison September 14, 2020 at 10:52 AM thanks Joseph:-) hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer September 13, 2020 at 4:37 PM lovely imagery, jan! best of luck in the contest... Jan Allison September 14, 2020 at 10:52 AM thanks Ilene:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich September 13, 2020 at 2:21 PM You did wonderfully with the themes here, Jan. Were we required to say which nature items we drew on? I still have not posted mine. I have about six poems yet unposted! Hope you are enjoying the day. Joe gets home early now on Sunday and I still have ten more poets I need to read. Jan Allison September 13, 2020 at 3:55 PM thanks Andrea its so nice to tackle forms I seldom write, i'm not sure if stating the themes is a requirement but i thought I would do it:-) hugs jan xx