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My Curious Kitten

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My lovely kitten laps up milk I stroke her fur it’s as smooth as silk Fluffy espies butterflies with delight she wants to play, paws reach out - her new friends fly away! She clambers upon the garden wall loses her footing, I watch her fall Meowing loudly I hear her call next minute, she’s chasing her new ball! curious kitten frolics in the summer sun … poppies sway in breeze nature themes, kitten, garden, butterflies Writing Challenge - Nature, Four in One - Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France 09/13/20

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Constance La France

Date: 9/29/2020 1:28:00 PM

Jan, congratulations on your win in my Nature Four in One Challenge with this wonderful write, a FAV for me, I love your image too _Constance

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/21/2020 7:03:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/15/2020 1:07:00 PM

She sounds marvelous; this is a winner in any contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/15/2020 2:34:00 PM

thanks Caren:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/15/2020 4:57:00 AM

- A wonderful poem ... that will charm Constance's heart :) - Best wishes in the contest, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 9/15/2020 8:10:00 AM

thanks Anne-Lise:-) hugs jan xx

Rico Leffanta

Date: 9/14/2020 11:54:00 AM

No one has yet observed what a nice write you have done despite your allergy! Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison
Date: 9/14/2020 2:47:00 PM

aww thanks Rico that comments means a lot:-) hugs jan xx

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/14/2020 10:02:00 AM

Your kitten is just too lovely my friend. We have never had a cat, but neighbors of ours have one and it has adopted us, also a a very cute cat, a tabby. This poem is beautiful - good luck Jan. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/14/2020 2:44:00 PM

thanks Jennifer its pure fiction I'm afraid... I have not pets I have an allergy to animal fur:-) hugs jan xx

Duke Beaufort

Date: 9/14/2020 3:37:00 AM

Nice to be a new cat. Very playful. Fun to watch indeed!!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/14/2020 2:43:00 PM

pure fiction Duke, so good to see you back:-) hugs jan xx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/14/2020 2:06:00 AM

You rose to this challenge with great ideas. Best for a win. ~~

Jan Allison
Date: 9/14/2020 2:41:00 PM

thanks Victor it was fun:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 9/13/2020 8:39:00 PM

Marvelous poem, I do know Constance will love it.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/14/2020 2:41:00 PM

i hope she likes it Eve:-) hugs jan xx

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 9/13/2020 8:02:00 PM

Kittens are so mischievous, it's a delight to watch them play - reads like a winner to me!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/14/2020 10:57:00 AM

thanks Michelle they are fun to watch:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/13/2020 6:25:00 PM

I can hear her meowing. My grandson has his minecraft world filled with meowing kittens.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/14/2020 10:56:00 AM

Thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 9/13/2020 4:43:00 PM

Very nicely penned Jan, best wishes, hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 9/14/2020 10:52:00 AM

thanks Joseph:-) hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 9/13/2020 4:37:00 PM

lovely imagery, jan! best of luck in the contest...

Jan Allison
Date: 9/14/2020 10:52:00 AM

thanks Ilene:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/13/2020 2:21:00 PM

You did wonderfully with the themes here, Jan. Were we required to say which nature items we drew on? I still have not posted mine. I have about six poems yet unposted! Hope you are enjoying the day. Joe gets home early now on Sunday and I still have ten more poets I need to read.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/13/2020 3:55:00 PM

thanks Andrea its so nice to tackle forms I seldom write, i'm not sure if stating the themes is a requirement but i thought I would do it:-) hugs jan xx