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My Cupid Given Treasure

For My Tim, the Love of My Life
Love’s hues mix to create a perfect two - thru and thru, love thus colors me and you. Darling, it’s Cupid’s season of heart shivers, when we praise passions from his bow’s quivers. With you, quivers bear desires and fires; fires flame love’s art, fusing both our soft hearts; soft hearts whose kiss gathers nirvana bliss; bliss throbs our appeal perfectly ideal; ideal love themes develop our love dreams; dreams inspire romance to seal love’s chance; chance feeds our best happy and gives gladly; gladly our souls share all of life with flair; flair adorns our love’s notions and motions; motions deploy our harmonious joy; joy raises our ecstasy fill with thrills; thrills lift our love high on heavenly sighs; sighs hold all phases of our love traces, and prime pages silk held in love laces. I will forever love you with pleasure, my ever-always, cupid-given treasure. ... CayCay Jennings February 1, 2018

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Date: 2/3/2018 7:28:00 PM
I do not believe this form has a name, Caycay. In fact, the time I did my food poem, that style just CAME to me, as if it were my own invention. Later on , here at Soup, someone asked us to do a poem similar to that style. I can't remember if they had a name for it either. It's something we can look into! I think it just occurs to poets once in a while to write that way. It worked so well for you in this poem
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Date: 2/3/2018 8:03:00 AM
This poem is so filled with the joy love brings. I can tell your words are heartfelt and I feel the happiness with every word. Isn't it a blessing to have found your soul mate? This is lovely CayCay. xxoo ; )
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Date: 2/2/2018 9:48:00 PM
Some Cay Cay brilliance coming through in patches here and there.This cheeky , tongue in cheek piece is a thrilling read
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Date: 2/2/2018 11:13:00 AM
WoW! CayCay, This is sooo romantic my friend. I enjoyed how you took the last word from each line to start the next line. I am so happy you found your soulmate. My opinion is when you find them later in life you can appreciate and treasure them all the more ( however the sooner you find them would be amazing). I think you've penned yourself a winner . I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 2/2/2018 8:59:00 PM
Hey, sweetheart - I so enjoy reading your comments, can easily hear your 'Wow' as though you say it aloud as you type. If I'm wrong, let me have my fantasy, I like it! I value the inspiration of contests (kinda like assignments) that stir my muse, but I don't seem to have much success with contests which is what it is and will be, I'm good, but know I appreciate the luck and I dearly appreciate you! Love .. CayCay
Date: 2/1/2018 8:46:00 PM
and guess what? I am DONE, caught up for the day and I count 6 or 7 contests I am still interested in writing for . When? When? Only time will tell!!!
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Date: 2/1/2018 8:45:00 PM
wowowow, so romantic and so well created . I know some have done this form before but I don't know its name. Where you take the last word and use it to start next line . I even have a food poem that does it. haha. (of course, it's my passion, food). Sure hope this does well for you, sweetie.
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Date: 2/1/2018 1:50:00 PM
What a great title, A lovely romantic poem with some sweet lines.. I am sure if you have a man, he would be flattered to read such a dedication.. I wish everyone had a cupid-given treasure, but they say he is blind....
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 2/1/2018 1:55:00 PM
Thank you so much for such uplifting comments. I do indeed have the love of my life and after the contest, I will dedicate this to him, just as I read it to him before I posted it. Tim is my inspiration, has been for 5 years now. I only regret we didn't find each other earlier in life and that I waited three years before starting the five. Never give up on your soulmate! All the best ... CayCay

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