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My Credence On Heaven

I close my eyes tight to commence my imagination on welkin... I start off speedily..!! The bubbly clouds carries the expired souls swiftly and releases nearby the heavenly door which eagerly awaits their entry through sprinkled petals.. Stepping into the picturesque mansion located within the azure.. The souls feel mesmerized and gazes in trance.. The aesthetic garden filled with multi- coloured flowers with species of butterflies impresses their sight, Never allowing them to regret the death that swallowed minutes ago. Sitting on a winged throne the Angel politely welcomes their arrival and quickly assigns their simple tasks. They need to water the garden regularly, timely pick flowers, finely decorate and promptly worship lord,maintain the surrounding clean & tidy, perform prayers, dance & sing and entertain the doomed souls who resides along with them. Hurriedly I wake my eyes to visualise everything in front of me. Utter flop to be ..my vivid imagination hastily ends with this. 2-6-2020 ~DEEPA~ Note1:The Heaven poetry Contest. Sponsored by Regina Riddle. Note2:BRIAN'S SELECT 2,any form, any theme Poetry Contest Sponsor:Brian Strand

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Date: 6/2/2020 12:38:00 PM
Hello Deepa, wow! You really did use your imagination in this poem. You did well.. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/4/2020 12:44:00 PM
Hello Deepa, Thank you for such a lovely comment. from you.It is afternoon almost 2 o'clock. Enjoy your day my friend. love Darlene Take Care.
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V. Deepa
Date: 6/2/2020 12:55:00 PM
Hello Darlene mam, "A person who keeps a check on everyone and brightens their day through encouraging reviews" And that's you....an amazing person:-):-) Thankyou for these lovely appreciations which keeps me satisfied always.:-) Yeah I enjoyed my day.Now it's night already here.Time for me to sleep. I wish you to enjoy your lovely day mam:-) Take care.With love~ Deepa

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