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My Contst Pom

Good morning ma’am, how do you do?
How I wish I was going with you
On a trip on a boat
With a sail for a coat
Crossing rain, sky, and windy storms too

Copyright © Tony Devers | Year Posted 2016

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October 14, 2016 at 10:59 AM

Great job Tony, congratulations...

October 13, 2016 at 7:17 PM

Nice, Tony! Congrats on your podium win. Sandra

Beautiful Scars

October 13, 2016 at 10:45 AM

very cute Tony...Congrats on your placement :)-luloo

October 13, 2016 at 7:28 AM

Congratulations!

October 13, 2016 at 7:10 AM

Congrats on your win, Tony.

October 13, 2016 at 2:28 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Tony:-) hugs Jan xx

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe

October 12, 2016 at 11:44 PM

Great limerick Tony - congrats Mark

October 12, 2016 at 11:00 PM

Hi Davie, Good limerick! Congratulations on your fine win:-) Alexis

October 12, 2016 at 10:01 PM

Bravo! Viv

October 13, 2016 at 3:32 AM

Thanks for organising this Viv. It was fun to enter, and I'm delighted with my 2nd place.

October 12, 2016 at 9:37 PM

Great limerick! Congrats on your win, Tony. Janice

October 10, 2016 at 8:41 AM

Nice limerick, Tony. There is a children's song by a singer named Harry Nilson entitled "Blanket For A Sail," that's what your poem reminded me of.

October 10, 2016 at 1:23 PM

Thanks Daniel. Delighted to be associated, however indirectly, with the great Harry Nilsson.

October 10, 2016 at 6:08 AM

Perfect for Viv's contest - it flows so beautifully:-) hugs Jan xx

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