My Contst Pom

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Stood looking down upon skin tan and glowing
As this bikini clad girl was not knowing
Soon I was blushing
My blood quickly rushing
For most of a ravishing boob was now showing
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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December 8, 2019 at 2:04 AM
That truly brought a smile to my face. Everything that a limerick should be.
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December 9, 2019 at 9:44 AM
Thanks again. Glad you liked this one.
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October 8, 2016 at 6:06 PM
GREAT JOB. OH, I hope I can do this too!!!
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October 9, 2016 at 9:36 AM
Thanks so very much Andrea. So you are the famous Andrea Dietrich I've been reading so much about. :) I appreciate your kind comment.
Wolf Avatar
October 7, 2016 at 7:53 PM
Hahaha, Can definitely relate to this, my friend... Haha.. Definitely.. well done /|\
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October 8, 2016 at 4:17 PM
Thanks so much Rick. I am glad you liked this one
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October 7, 2016 at 1:04 PM
This is hilarious, you rhymed and were funny too, you have to win this contst! :)
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October 7, 2016 at 1:45 PM
Thx so much Paloma. I am happy to bring some laughter your way.
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October 7, 2016 at 12:43 PM
This is very funny, Chris. You have drawn a very exciting picture:) Good luck!
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October 7, 2016 at 1:45 PM
Thanks so much Daniel. I'm glad you got a chuckle out of this one.
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