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My Conscience

Like fresh nectar secreting so sweetly, Within bowls of immaculate flowers; Like the sweetest silent sound so softly, Blooming the buds into flower powers… Like drops of water into streams gently, Dripping and rippling and then brim-filling; Spirit's sanctified souvenirs slowly, Has showered in me blessings soul-thrilling... With silence, prayer, trust, beliefs benign, Contemplation cum action prevailing; He has made his voice of conscience now mine, He has given me his heart love-flowing... God and love alone my conscience depends, God, and love, for all, my conscience extends. 01 June 2021 Open Poetry 5 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Charlotte Puddifoot

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Date: 6/8/2021 4:15:00 AM
Congrats on your win. Enjoyed your work. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/25/2021 12:25:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 6/7/2021 7:17:00 PM
Dear Christuraj, your exquisite poem is filled with the beauty of faith. Congratulations for your excellent win in Charlotte's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/25/2021 12:25:00 PM
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Date: 6/6/2021 8:32:00 PM
Wow! Thanks for sharing this. I'm delighted with your concluding couplet. Thanks likewise for your constant uplifting comments. God bless you.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/7/2021 7:55:00 AM
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Date: 6/6/2021 8:16:00 AM
Congrats to win. But I differ. My Conscience does not depend on God Blessings
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/7/2021 7:56:00 AM
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Date: 6/6/2021 6:50:00 AM
Hello Christuraj, Congratulations on your excellent sonnet! I especially like the line, "Blooming the buds to flower powers." Sincerest regards, Brian
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/6/2021 6:59:00 AM
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Date: 6/6/2021 5:37:00 AM
Congratulations Alex, you penned a superb poem with profound faith. Blessings
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/6/2021 6:58:00 AM
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Date: 6/6/2021 4:25:00 AM
this is a lovely, spiritual sonnet, with some nice alliteration and rhyme - well done, and congrats on your win in my contest!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/6/2021 6:57:00 AM
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Date: 6/6/2021 4:08:00 AM
Beautiful! Congratulations
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/6/2021 6:57:00 AM
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Date: 6/1/2021 9:36:00 AM
Well done, Christuraj. I loved your alliteration, especially. Nice job!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/1/2021 9:49:00 AM
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Date: 6/1/2021 5:51:00 AM
Well written. Very nice poem :)
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/1/2021 7:58:00 AM
Thank you very much.