My Conscience

Like fresh nectar secreting so sweetly,
Within bowls of immaculate flowers;
Like the sweetest silent sound so softly,
Blooming the buds into flower powers…
Like drops of water into streams gently,
Dripping and rippling and then brim-filling;
Spirit's sanctified souvenirs slowly,
Has showered in me blessings soul-thrilling...
With silence, prayer, trust, beliefs benign,
Contemplation cum action prevailing;
He has made his voice of conscience now mine,
He has given me his heart love-flowing...
God and love alone my conscience depends,
God, and love, for all, my conscience extends.


01 June 2021
Open Poetry 5 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Charlotte Puddifoot
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Mcintosh Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 4:15 AM
Congrats on your win. Enjoyed your work. God bless you always, Love, Gina
Alex Avatar
June 25, 2021 at 12:25 PM
Thank you very much.
Ashley Avatar
June 7, 2021 at 7:17 PM
Dear Christuraj, your exquisite poem is filled with the beauty of faith. Congratulations for your excellent win in Charlotte's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Alex Avatar
June 25, 2021 at 12:25 PM
Thank you very much.
Agustin Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 8:32 PM
Wow! Thanks for sharing this. I'm delighted with your concluding couplet. Thanks likewise for your constant uplifting comments. God bless you.
Alex Avatar
June 7, 2021 at 7:55 AM
Thank you very much.
Dutta Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 8:16 AM
Congrats to win. But I differ. My Conscience does not depend on God Blessings
Alex Avatar
June 7, 2021 at 7:56 AM
Thank you very much.
Sambourne Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 6:50 AM
Hello Christuraj, Congratulations on your excellent sonnet! I especially like the line, "Blooming the buds to flower powers." Sincerest regards, Brian
Alex Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 6:59 AM
Thank you very much.
Poet Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 5:37 AM
Congratulations Alex, you penned a superb poem with profound faith. Blessings
Alex Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 6:58 AM
Thank you very much.
Puddifoot Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 4:25 AM
this is a lovely, spiritual sonnet, with some nice alliteration and rhyme - well done, and congrats on your win in my contest!
Alex Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 6:57 AM
Thank you very much.
Balasubramanian Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 4:08 AM
Beautiful! Congratulations
Alex Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 6:57 AM
Thank you very much.
Hankins Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 9:36 AM
Well done, Christuraj. I loved your alliteration, especially. Nice job!
Alex Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 9:49 AM
Thank you very much.
Sands Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 5:51 AM
Well written. Very nice poem :)
Alex Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 7:58 AM
Thank you very much.
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