My Cloud

Tiss alive!
But dead!
My cloud!

When alive it thunder spreadeth,
And when dead it darkness shedeth ,
My little virginal cloud!

In the night it shalt ascend,
And before the night would end,
It will return, my weary cloud.

When in anguished misery
It weepeth rain the world to see,
How woe can touch the clouds.

And if the accursed sun,
Doth decide with golden scythe, 
To penetrate my cloud,

Then my cloud shalt split asunder,
Oh with rain and mighty thunder,
The entire world enshroud!

And upon the morrow next,
When thou readeth this sweet text,
Thou shalt find me yon the shroud,

Oh thou sun, I scream to thee,
Not to display bravery,
Stay away from my lovely black cloud!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Kendrick Avatar
June 19, 2015 at 12:20 PM
I enjoyed reading your work today..Congrats on this winner..Sara..I really liked the flavor of your work..
Kendrick Avatar
June 19, 2015 at 12:20 PM
I enjoyed reading your work today..Congrats on this winner..Sara..I really liked the flavor of your work..
Corvus Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 8:00 AM
Thanks
A   Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 11:41 PM
Max, Congratulations on your cloud win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Corvus Avatar
June 19, 2015 at 9:20 AM
Thanks! :)
A  Avatar
June 16, 2015 at 9:18 PM
Max, Congratulations on a poem well done. Thank you for entering my CLOUD contest. Luv SKAT
Corvus Avatar
June 19, 2015 at 9:21 AM
Thank you. I hope you liked it.
A   Avatar
June 12, 2015 at 12:33 AM
Hello, Max, I like your style. I read this poem out loud. If this is for the cloud contest. I hope you score big.... HUGS...LINDA
La France Avatar
June 4, 2015 at 6:37 PM
Max, I do like your style this is a good one for the contest 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, dark
Corvus Avatar
June 4, 2015 at 11:46 PM
Thank you very much. I am glad you like it.
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