My Cloud

Tiss alive!
But dead!
My cloud!

When alive it thunder spreadeth,
And when dead it darkness shedeth ,
My little virginal cloud!

In the night it shalt ascend,
And before the night would end,
It will return, my weary cloud.

When in anguished misery
It weepeth rain the world to see,
How woe can touch the clouds.

And if the accursed sun,
Doth decide with golden scythe, 
To penetrate my cloud,

Then my cloud shalt split asunder,
Oh with rain and mighty thunder,
The entire world enshroud!

And upon the morrow next,
When thou readeth this sweet text,
Thou shalt find me yon the shroud,

Oh thou sun, I scream to thee,
Not to display bravery,
Stay away from my lovely black cloud!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 6/19/2015 12:20:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your work today..Congrats on this winner..Sara..I really liked the flavor of your work..
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Max Corvus
Date: 9/16/2015 8:00:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 6/19/2015 12:20:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your work today..Congrats on this winner..Sara..I really liked the flavor of your work..
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Date: 6/18/2015 11:41:00 PM
Max, Congratulations on your cloud win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 6/19/2015 9:20:00 AM
Thanks! :)
Date: 6/16/2015 9:18:00 PM
Max, Congratulations on a poem well done. Thank you for entering my CLOUD contest. Luv SKAT
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Max Corvus
Date: 6/19/2015 9:21:00 AM
Thank you. I hope you liked it.
Date: 6/12/2015 12:33:00 AM
Hello, Max, I like your style. I read this poem out loud. If this is for the cloud contest. I hope you score big.... HUGS...LINDA
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Date: 6/4/2015 6:37:00 PM
Max, I do like your style this is a good one for the contest 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, dark
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Date: 6/4/2015 11:46:00 PM
Thank you very much. I am glad you like it.
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