My Christmas All-Star

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My Christmas All-Star I miss you my son, my all-star, Winter paint faces full of cheers, St. Nick and Frosty, came so far, Both are treasures to little dears. Winter paint faces full of cheers, Gaze for Santa's sleigh o'er the glens, Both are treasures to little dears, Made Frosty with some odds and ends. Gaze for Santa's sleigh o'er the glens, St. Nick's reindeers were used as gears, Made Frosty with some odds and ends, Was packed with snow as Christmas nears. St. Nick's reindeers were used as gears, St. Nick and Frosty, came so far, Was packed with snow as Christmas nears, I miss you my son, my all-star. 2020 February 07 *3rd Place* PANTOUM ~~Line Gauthier

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/29/2020 12:08:00 PM

Really lovely. Your words made me go "ahh" with your grieving so eloquently expressed. Congratulations William.

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/29/2020 12:38:00 PM

Much appreciated, Sam, and thanks! -- Aloha!~@wk