My Childhood Lover

"How sweet to the heart are the scenes of my childhood"
                                   Samuel Woodworth, 1785-1842

Take sugar canes; if not, take bitter gourds. 
Munch, while listening to my tales, Chums,
My heroic acts ... mischievous records. 

Before becoming a teen, ah, beat Drums! 
I had a lover, a beautiful maid, 
A lovely dame who enticed me with plums.   

Straight I went with the rooster's call, and stayed 
With her; lay in her lap; explored her map; 
And with jackals' howling, homeward I swayed. 

Just after school, I went back to her lap, 
Drowned in her sap, till rooster did me call. 
So wild was our love; so tempt was her tap. 

But our love had a crack --- had a great fall; 
I went to a town school, and roamed with teams, 
Leaving my love, and my lovelier doll. 

My lover was the wood, that gleamed through beams;
Sweeter is that scene; I see in my dreams.


Jan. 19, 2021 (Originally posted on Nov. 22, 2020)
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Syllabic count: 10 syllables in each line (Ref. Poetry Soup)

*A 3rd Place* in the following contest (judged on Nov. 28, 2020)

Nov. 22, 2020 
Terza Rima Form Poetry Contest 
Contest Sponsor: Constance La France
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Kendrick Avatar
January 24, 2021 at 1:44 PM
Creative winner. Way to go. Congrats.. Sara
Fowler Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 11:56 AM
Nice one Newt my friend. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
Ranaweera  Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 12:24 PM
Thank you so much, Linda, for this sweet comment and the congrats!!
Y. Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 6:44 AM
Hi Newton, I enjoyed reading about your childhood memories. Thanks for sharing. Congratulations on your winning write. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
Ranaweera  Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 7:18 AM
Thank you so much, Alexis, for this amazingly encouraging comments and the congratulations!!
La France Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 1:52 AM
Newton, congratulations on your win in my Terza Rima Contest with this wonderful and enchanting poem _Constance
Ranaweera  Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 4:30 AM
Thank you so much, Constance, for this lovely comment and the placement!!
Krutsinger Avatar
November 28, 2020 at 2:41 AM
"So wild was our love; so tempt was her tap." - I adore the woods. I have lived in the middle of the woods for the past 26 years, and happily!
Ranaweera  Avatar
November 28, 2020 at 3:01 PM
Thank you so much, Caren, for this immensely great comment!!
Dietrich Avatar
November 22, 2020 at 5:59 PM
oh I LOVE the creativity of personification here. So nice, Newton. The ending couplet superb.
Ranaweera  Avatar
November 22, 2020 at 8:23 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea, for this impressively lovely read and comment!!
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