My Child Is Perfect

The day you were born I couldn't believe I could create something so beautiful

My child is perfect

All your firsts....you walked late, you talked late, 
but you were only waiting until you could do it just right

My child is perfect

Your sister didn't want you there 
She wanted to stay the best one, the only one

My child is perfect

Your teacher didn't believe me when i told her you were gifted 
All parents think their child is the best
At the next parent/teacher meeting she said, "You were right"

My child is perfect

You went to a new school with other kids as gifted as you
You didn't feel like you fit in
No matter where you go, someone will try to make you feel like you are less 
There are always those who need to make others feel like less so they feel more than they are

My child is perfect

You were the victim but you were called the bully
They called the police, they sent you away
I hate them for making you feel like the bad guy

My child is perfect

Your father said you could do better, you should do better
He didn't see you, he just saw numbers and letters

My child is perfect

I wasn't there for you because he demanded all my attention
He used his disability against all of us
He used it to take me away from you

My child is perfect

You didn't see all the good I saw in you
You are a writer, a poet, an artist
You are beautiful, but you don't believe me when I tell you that

My child is perfect

You tried to take your beauty away from me, from this world you think doesn't want you here
I am thankful you didn't succeed...not the first time, the second time, the third time
Not this last time

My child is perfect
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May 6, 2014 at 2:31 PM
Becky, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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May 5, 2014 at 12:37 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Becky:) - I choose your first beautiful written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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May 5, 2014 at 2:55 AM
This, poems amazing, Becky, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Allison Avatar
May 4, 2014 at 6:37 PM
Such an emotional poem - i agree with the sentiment 'my child is perfect' Hugs jan xx
Nance Avatar
May 4, 2014 at 6:30 AM
ooh :( wow I could feel your emotions in every word as you wrote this story for us. I wish I could give you a big hug.
Tilbrook Avatar
May 4, 2014 at 2:28 PM
Thank you. I accept virtual hugs :-) Things have been very emotional over the past year and it has culminated with this poem. My daughter is the poet in the family, but I have been inspired by her and may write more.
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May 4, 2014 at 4:15 AM
WOW!i got mixed reactions reading this,it start so right then end with such weight! I hope your child read this because might believe it and never try to take their life away fro such a loving mom! Great INK!!!
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May 4, 2014 at 2:29 PM
Thank you so much. I did give this poem to my daughter after I wrote it and she was very moved.
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