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My Child Is Perfect

The day you were born I couldn't believe I could create something so beautiful My child is perfect All your firsts....you walked late, you talked late, but you were only waiting until you could do it just right My child is perfect Your sister didn't want you there She wanted to stay the best one, the only one My child is perfect Your teacher didn't believe me when i told her you were gifted All parents think their child is the best At the next parent/teacher meeting she said, "You were right" My child is perfect You went to a new school with other kids as gifted as you You didn't feel like you fit in No matter where you go, someone will try to make you feel like you are less There are always those who need to make others feel like less so they feel more than they are My child is perfect You were the victim but you were called the bully They called the police, they sent you away I hate them for making you feel like the bad guy My child is perfect Your father said you could do better, you should do better He didn't see you, he just saw numbers and letters My child is perfect I wasn't there for you because he demanded all my attention He used his disability against all of us He used it to take me away from you My child is perfect You didn't see all the good I saw in you You are a writer, a poet, an artist You are beautiful, but you don't believe me when I tell you that My child is perfect You tried to take your beauty away from me, from this world you think doesn't want you here I am thankful you didn't succeed...not the first time, the second time, the third time Not this last time My child is perfect

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/6/2014 2:31:00 PM
Becky, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/5/2014 12:37:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Becky:) - I choose your first beautiful written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/5/2014 2:55:00 AM
This, poems amazing, Becky, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/4/2014 6:37:00 PM
Such an emotional poem - i agree with the sentiment 'my child is perfect' Hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/4/2014 6:30:00 AM
ooh :( wow I could feel your emotions in every word as you wrote this story for us. I wish I could give you a big hug.
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Becky Tilbrook
Date: 5/4/2014 2:28:00 PM
Thank you. I accept virtual hugs :-) Things have been very emotional over the past year and it has culminated with this poem. My daughter is the poet in the family, but I have been inspired by her and may write more.
Date: 5/4/2014 4:15:00 AM
WOW!i got mixed reactions reading this,it start so right then end with such weight! I hope your child read this because might believe it and never try to take their life away fro such a loving mom! Great INK!!!
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Becky Tilbrook
Date: 5/4/2014 2:29:00 PM
Thank you so much. I did give this poem to my daughter after I wrote it and she was very moved.

Book: Shattered Sighs