My Child, I Cry For Thee-A Lament

(For my first child, who could not make it to this world) Your motion I feel Oblivious of the pain My son I rejoiced If only you were with me For you I mourn in regret ©Nadiya (11 Feb '15)

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Date: 2/12/2015 7:27:00 AM
Sad so sad. I feel for you Nad But you have transformed your grief into a beautiful poem. Great one.God bless you.Your friend Rajat
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Date: 2/12/2015 7:31:00 AM
Thank you very much Dear friend.
Date: 2/11/2015 5:57:00 PM
I feel with you; this is definitely hard to bear.. so beautifully expressed, Nadiya..namaskar and huggs
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Date: 2/11/2015 9:27:00 PM
Thank you Nette... nic of you to stop by.. hugs nad!
Date: 2/11/2015 4:00:00 PM
I'm sorry for this great loss you went through. a very feeling poem.
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Date: 2/11/2015 9:28:00 PM
Thank you Andrea... appreciate your visit and nice words.nad!
Date: 2/11/2015 1:15:00 AM
Very beautiful and soulful Nadiya...this poem scratched my heart. ....and thank you for your commens..I find them very encouraging..Peter
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Date: 2/11/2015 1:34:00 AM
Thank you Peter... I enjoyed reading your poem.
Date: 2/11/2015 12:39:00 AM
Am Sorry about that. Stay strong
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Date: 2/11/2015 12:47:00 AM
thank younjeri :)... sometimes memories flood in and its difficult to forget the bygones
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