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My Child and His Butterfly Story

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Fascinated with butterflies, he is charmed by these creatures' freedom-flight. My child, secured in his wheelchair delightfully grips yellow crayon. Along creativity challenge, he pursues artwork schedule while struggling against spastic restlessness... Soon with glee-filled countenance, championing his thumbs-up trademark devoid of bashful gesture he shows me his masterpiece: a glowing butterfly radiant in yellow he has painstakingly colored… Witnessing his gracious achievement of gradual milestones, I'm thankful for God-wrought* remarkable changes, notable indications that he is “educable.” Why so? He was diagnosed to “progress toward retrogression” by his pediatrician more than a decade ago... (We then learned that she left earth, but that was another story.) Yes, I’m beholding actual metamorphosis toward joyous fulfillment. With faith in the Sovereign’s miracle, I envision my boy in his functional zest like a butterfly that has surmounted infantile epilepsy --- now becoming triumphant over “global developmental delay.” *Psalm 92:4 For thou, LORD, hast made me glad through thy work: I will triumph in the works of thy hands. July 3, 2020 Edited on October 2, 2022 2nd place, "Chapter 1" Narrative Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Matt Caliri; judged on 11/1/2022.

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Date: 11/2/2022 6:02:00 AM
this is such a lovely story can't wait to here the following, congrats dear Beata
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Date: 11/1/2022 10:51:00 PM
I work with kids with autism so your story really spoke to me. Excellent work placing 2nd in my contest! Sorry it took so long to judge..a hiccup in the space-time continuum.
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