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My Ceaseless Torment

I can feel blades of steel tearing deep into my soul. Yet no blood pours out of it and still it feels whole. It keeps existng, despite the waves of terrible pain. As my eyes flow like the waters of a monsoon rain. There is nothing that I can do to end my ceaseless torment. Except to prostrate myself to God and truly repent.

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Date: 8/5/2010 11:49:00 AM
that will put an abrupt end to any sad and sadistic story
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Date: 7/24/2010 11:30:00 AM
Great couples that you have penned that expresses your faith in God..Sara
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Date: 7/8/2010 2:32:00 AM
a nice poem, sometimes the enemu try to give us torment to test our faith, but the Lord wil carry us through any barrier, any torment any pain, he Loves us and so amazing, it is hard been in a warzone every day but he will help youhe will bring victory, peace, joy and calm to you my friend. Shalom. resist the devil and he shal flee from you, God bless you from diane
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Date: 7/7/2010 11:21:00 AM
HI, Sheol. This is very POE-ish! Since you were kind enough to comment to preying mantis, I added you to my palindrome list poem. It's centered and is really hard to get names on that list. haha. But I got you there, and I feel bad how many others I probably left off unintentionally. LUv, Andrea
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