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My Cats and Christmas Tree

Mati and Lacy are frisky, feline critters With intense beaming eyes and white whiskers. We think our cats begin to Christmas plot When we carry in the first Christmas box; They plan ways to successfully intrude And conquer our beautiful tree filled room. Oh, those two cats and the dressed Christmas tree! Wanting just fun from cat calamity, We strive to relish their hilarity And not anxiety about our tree. I often think my cats only sated When they see us become aggravated. I soon found pawing proof under the tree Where one or both had ribbon pawing glee. Looking close, I spied loose black colored fur – Ah, the Mati – Daddy needs to scold her. And Mati, what debris is stuck on thee? Did you drag the manger straw to our tree? We thought the evening quiet, the cats still. Chilling, we watched a Christmas show until THUD – Lacy soars out of the Christmas tree And sheds tinsel everywhere as she flees. The tree topper wobbles, then falls and breaks. A pity, it was brand new and looked great. We consider spray water therapy But, she will hide until there’s harmony. Pondering what to place atop our tree, I point and say, “The tallest stem I see Is left of the painted pine cone and nut, Go find Lacy and I'll stick it up her ear. That'll make the tree quite merry, my dear.”
December 2, 2015 / Shadow Hamilton / Christmas Tree Contest

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Date: 12/26/2015 7:47:00 PM
CayCay, congratulations on your placement in Rob's contest. Nice to see it on the winner's list. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/25/2015 3:31:00 PM
CAYCAY, Congratulations on your wonderful win. *** Merry Christmas and Happy New Year! SKAT
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Date: 12/25/2015 1:00:00 PM
Great to see this placed in the screwed contest CayCay :-) I do love these contests and giving our poem a second chance:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/24/2015 2:25:00 PM
YES< now you got the win you deserved. SMILES. LUV YA, Lady!!
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Date: 12/24/2015 8:56:00 AM
Beautiful CayCay awesome write!
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Date: 12/20/2015 8:26:00 PM
STill can't believe this never won. it was better than my own cat poem because mine had been invented! Yours is based on true Lacy!
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Date: 12/13/2015 11:54:00 AM
What a fun and enjoyable write! I felt like I was there. Excellent!
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/13/2015 4:21:00 PM
Thank you for your uplifting and fulfilling comments - they mean so much to me ... CayCay
Date: 12/11/2015 3:17:00 PM
hahaha. stick her right up at the top?? with a pine cone? that would sure serve her right!! this is DELIGHTFUL, CayCay. To me, its seems to be what the judge is going for, but this is a judge I cannot figure out. So all I can say is good luck to thee!! and now I need to hurry off here. I am seeing Suffragate, the movie I have been wanting to see all month, it is finally down here in my town at the dollar theater. it starts in 2 hours!
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/13/2015 4:20:00 PM
No matter the judging, I love the authentic part of this write; it is really my cats and Tim I wrote about. Thank you for sharing your responses. I don't know much about Suffragate, but I will soon enough - hope you had a great show ... CayCay
Date: 12/11/2015 9:29:00 AM
This jerks at our funny bone in innocent fun. The imagery and story line presented is humorous and strikes a cord of familiarity in our collective memories and hearts. The flow is good and the reader can chuckle at the experience. Emile.
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/11/2015 10:11:00 AM
Thank you, dear Emile - your comments are uplifting and meaningful to me ... CayCay
Date: 12/10/2015 11:58:00 AM
This sure made me laugh CayCay - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx 7
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/10/2015 12:09:00 PM
So happy to hear that. Thank you, Jan - you validated my write. I plan on catching up with your page today and look forward to it ... CayCay

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