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OLD CHRISTMAS POEM CONTEST / CONSTANCE LA FRANCE / SUBMITTED 12-20-2025

My Cats and Christmas Tree

"We two groove on moves around the Christmas tree and no one can see us for we are stealth itself."  by Mati and Lacy FeLione


Mati and Lacy are frisky, feline critters
with intense beaming eyes and long whiskers.
We think our cats begin to Christmas plot
the second we bring in the first box.
They plan ways to successfully zoom-zoom
and conquer our beautiful tree filled room.

It's scary to see our felines eye the finished tree!
(I often think my cats are only sated
when they see us become aggravated.)
Wanting just fun from cat calamity,
we strive to relish their hilarity 
and not feel anxiety about our tree.

I soon found pawing proof under the tree
where one or both had ribbon pawing glee.
Looking closely, I spied loose black colored fur –
ah, the Mati – Daddy needs to scold her -
and Mati, what debris is stuck on thee?
Did your tail drag the manger straw to our tree?

Later, the evening was quiet, even the cats still.
Chilling, we watched a Christmas show until
THUD – Lacy soars out of the Christmas tree
and sheds tinsel everywhere as she flees.
The tree topper wobbles, then falls and breaks.
A pity, it was new and now it's lost to a cat quake

We consider spray water therapy
but she will hide until there’s harmony.
Pondering what to place atop our tree,
I point and say, “The tallest stem I see
Is left of the painted pinecone and nut,
go find Lacy and I'll stick it up her ear.
That'll make the tree quite merry, my dear.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
December 30, 2025 at 12:39 AM
Hurrah for a great win on this oldie but goodie, Caycay.
Williams Avatar
December 28, 2025 at 4:49 PM
CayCay, congratulations on a strong showing in this contest, complete with a highly suitable, accompanying photo! Very best, Bartholomew
Haight Avatar
December 26, 2015 at 7:47 PM
CayCay, congratulations on your placement in Rob's contest. Nice to see it on the winner's list. Hugs, Sandra
A  Avatar
December 25, 2015 at 3:31 PM
CAYCAY, Congratulations on your wonderful win. *** Merry Christmas and Happy New Year! SKAT
Allison Avatar
December 25, 2015 at 1:00 PM
Great to see this placed in the screwed contest CayCay :-) I do love these contests and giving our poem a second chance:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 2:25 PM
YES< now you got the win you deserved. SMILES. LUV YA, Lady!!
Tor Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 8:56 AM
Beautiful CayCay awesome write!
Dietrich Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 8:26 PM
STill can't believe this never won. it was better than my own cat poem because mine had been invented! Yours is based on true Lacy!
Yvonne Avatar
December 13, 2015 at 11:54 AM
What a fun and enjoyable write! I felt like I was there. Excellent!
Godwin Avatar
December 13, 2015 at 4:21 PM
Thank you for your uplifting and fulfilling comments - they mean so much to me ... CayCay
Dietrich Avatar
December 11, 2015 at 3:17 PM
hahaha. stick her right up at the top?? with a pine cone? that would sure serve her right!! this is DELIGHTFUL, CayCay. To me, its seems to be what the judge is going for, but this is a judge I cannot figure out. So all I can say is good luck to thee!! and now I need to hurry off here. I am seeing Suffragate, the movie I have been wanting to see all month, it is finally down here in my town at the dollar theater. it starts in 2 hours!
Godwin Avatar
December 13, 2015 at 4:20 PM
No matter the judging, I love the authentic part of this write; it is really my cats and Tim I wrote about. Thank you for sharing your responses. I don't know much about Suffragate, but I will soon enough - hope you had a great show ... CayCay
Pinet Avatar
December 11, 2015 at 9:29 AM
This jerks at our funny bone in innocent fun. The imagery and story line presented is humorous and strikes a cord of familiarity in our collective memories and hearts. The flow is good and the reader can chuckle at the experience. Emile.
Godwin Avatar
December 11, 2015 at 10:11 AM
Thank you, dear Emile - your comments are uplifting and meaningful to me ... CayCay
Allison Avatar
December 10, 2015 at 11:58 AM
This sure made me laugh CayCay - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx 7
Godwin Avatar
December 10, 2015 at 12:09 PM
So happy to hear that. Thank you, Jan - you validated my write. I plan on catching up with your page today and look forward to it ... CayCay
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