My Car Is My Angel For Women Only Contest

I call her Angel
My man made metal guardian 
Protecting me from pearls of the sky
She provides me with warmth and comfort
As she accompanies me through life

Her contoured racy chassis of silver
Not too unlike my own
Her alloy wheels grip the tar
Taking me to all new destinations
That were previously unknown

We complement each other nicely
As I sit behind the wheel
Excitement is beyond imagination
But speed is not of the essence
In my fast and furious mobile machine

All shiny and glistening like new
Sparkling clean with fresh glazing
And lined with silver chrome  
Headlights brighten my path ahead
Ensuring I find my way home

I am attracted to shiny things
We women love a bit of bling
My car is like my man
Simple and safe
I take care of her as I do him 

I love to drive on empty roads
Just me and Angel on our own
Blaring our favourite music so loud
Me singing on the top of my voice
She doesn’t care I am not in tune

My car is my second home
I clean her as often if not more
She sleeps in her garage safe and warm
Until the next time we uncover
Even more adventures galore

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 1/11/2016 12:17:00 AM
Considering you don't drive, Sarah, an excellent write. Well done! Viv x
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Date: 1/11/2016 8:43:00 AM
Thank you Viv, I drive in my dreams, so I just revisualied my dream of driving down long empty roads singing along to mDavid Guetta :)
Date: 1/10/2016 11:30:00 PM
a wonderful win... Nice to see it on top. SKAT
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Date: 1/11/2016 8:41:00 AM
Thank you Skat, I am so happy as I don't drive so had to blag it somewhat! Hope all ok with you.... keep smiling :)
Date: 1/10/2016 10:08:00 PM
Hello Sarah, taking one of the top spots in my contest :) Congratulations on your awesome win. ""You showed me yours-- now's my turn to show you mine --- LADIES"" Stop by my latest blog if you'd like. I have no poem to share under this topic. In which you wrote bravely. I'd like to share photos of my BUDDY (car).......... Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/11/2016 8:40:00 AM
Thank you Linda :) I am over the moon to be placed so high!
Date: 12/13/2015 10:28:00 PM
You sound like my wife except her car is called Harry. Entertaining write.
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Date: 12/14/2015 1:44:00 AM
Thank you Mark, I actually have never driven, haven't got a licence and never even sat behind a wheel! I would love to drive and love cars, Top Gear is my favourite programme! :)
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