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My Candy Cane Train

Dark Chocolate Rivers sinfully twist ...through marshmallow trees in May Cotton candy webs clenched in my fist Music-box songs lightly play Cupcake Merry-Go-Round safely sings As I watch the Cherry-bombs rain Lolly Pop Lights in colorful rings All aboard my candy cane train~ *inspired by my seven yr old daughter....Brooke

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/7/2009 10:51:00 AM

A delicious rendition, Jane! I'll bet this is Brooke's favorite poem. It captures the magic of a child's imagination. Very nice! And thanks for your comments. That was actually a true story, but I dare not say that to everyone. Bless you, Carolyn

John Loving Iii

Date: 4/19/2009 1:30:00 PM

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Matthew Anish

Date: 4/19/2009 11:04:00 AM

Reminds me of a song by the Lemon Pipers and Big Rock Candy Mountain. A most tasty read! Yours Matthew Anish

David Smalling

Date: 4/18/2009 11:43:00 AM

Your daughter must be th emost beautiful sight in your eyes for this poem is so beautiful ... I want eat it ... mmm

John Rhinem

Date: 4/17/2009 2:12:00 PM

Smile~"Hello Precious, Gifted & Lovely Jane Bowen!!!":):)~What a colorful, well crafted & vividly image filled write here!!!:):)~And, before I forget, I missed "You" on my Easter wishes rounds~So, "Happy Belated Easter To 'You' Dear Lady~I Hope It Was 'Beautiful For You & Your Loves!!!'":):)~And, I hope that "You" are also doing wonderfully!!!?:):)~And, this was a very "Beautiful Write!!!":):)~Lets go view another....

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/15/2009 8:07:00 AM

This should be included in a children's book of poetry! So sweet....yummy treat is your poem!! ~ love, Carrie

Christopher Higgins

Date: 4/15/2009 4:41:00 AM

Lovely write...You are so talented and your poems are so effective in drawing in the readers and making them feel at ease...there is something familiar about your writings that sings to me..well done.