Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

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- My Brother Stole My Halloween Candy -

Listen this is no comedy
                                   - you stole all my candy
                          I know how much younger my brother is
                                      ... love and tolerance
                             Sometimes it requires confrontation,
                                  get out frustration and anger
                                         Forgiveness or not
                               Does he deserve to be forgiven?
                                         Right now I feel :
                                                angry,
                                        very disappointed,
                                          low blood sugar,
                                           and are tired
                                  Just wait ... until Saturday
                                            Payback time





16/10/2019
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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If I were your brother Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Bobby May

1st place in the contest

Poem of the Week: 20/10/2019

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Sara Kendrick September 29, 2025 at 7:10 AM This is one from long ago that I thought I would comment on, and I see it was a winner. Way to go. Congratulations to you on this winner. It would fit in with the upcoming Halloween season. Sara K

Cecilia Macfarlane November 2, 2019 at 9:11 AM Double congrats on your winning poem Anne - Lise. Hugs Anne-Lise Andresen November 2, 2019 at 1:14 PM - Many thanks for congratulations, Cecilia :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Timothy Mcguire November 1, 2019 at 4:57 PM Nice poem, nice win Sunshine! Anne-Lise Andresen November 2, 2019 at 1:14 PM - Many thanks, Timothy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ronald D Thompson October 31, 2019 at 5:27 PM Yep that sure deserves a 1st in the competition. Excellent - CONGRATS on 1st place and POTW Anne-Lise. Best wishes...Ron x Anne-Lise Andresen November 1, 2019 at 5:04 AM - Many thanks for congratulations, Ron :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janice Canerdy October 31, 2019 at 9:01 AM I'm back to say CONGRATS, Anne-Lise! Janice Anne-Lise Andresen October 31, 2019 at 9:03 AM - Many thanks for congratulations, Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina October 31, 2019 at 7:13 AM Wonderful Anna-Lise. Congrats on both POTW and 1st place.. Love this! hugs // Charlie Anne-Lise Andresen October 31, 2019 at 7:26 AM - Many thanks for congratulations, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison October 30, 2019 at 5:57 PM POTW and a top spot, many congrats on your success Anne-Lise:-) hugs jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen October 31, 2019 at 4:25 AM - A double "Bingo" :))) - Many thanks for congratulations, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gershon Wolf October 30, 2019 at 2:39 PM Hey, hey, Anne-Lise! Congrats on your big winner in Bobby's contest. Way to go! Cheers, Gershon Anne-Lise Andresen October 31, 2019 at 4:26 AM - Many thanks for congratulations, Gershon - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Hello There October 30, 2019 at 2:14 PM Back with a congrats on your win ~ Now, don't let that soften you up to much, my friend...He must still pay ;) Anne-Lise Andresen October 31, 2019 at 4:28 AM - Many thanks for congratulations, H.T. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paula Goldsmith October 30, 2019 at 12:07 PM Congratulations on your 1st place win. So Cute. What a great picture to go with your poem. I still need to learn how to do the pictures. Enjoy your win.............. Anne-Lise Andresen October 31, 2019 at 4:29 AM - Many thanks for congratulations, Paula :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Curtis Moorman October 30, 2019 at 10:09 AM Anne-Lise, congrats on a super write. You could use Jan's remedy and give him exlax!!t8t lol Anne-Lise Andresen October 31, 2019 at 4:28 AM - Many thanks for congratulations, Curtis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y. October 30, 2019 at 9:26 AM Hi Anne-Lise, I really enjoyed this. Congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis Anne-Lise Andresen October 31, 2019 at 4:27 AM - Many thanks for congratulations, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams October 30, 2019 at 9:11 AM back for the third time...isn't it the third time's a charm?....anyway congratulations on your first place win my friend :) hugs Anne-Lise Andresen October 31, 2019 at 4:30 AM - Always a pleasure to see you on my poems, Sandra :) - Many thanks for congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bobby May October 30, 2019 at 8:47 AM Congratulations on your win my sweet friend Anne-Lise Andresen October 30, 2019 at 8:51 AM - Many thanks for my place on your winning list, Bobby :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Cecilia Macfarlane October 29, 2019 at 11:12 AM Haha, low blood sugar and high blood pressure! Congrats on your POTW Anne-Lise. Hugs Anne-Lise Andresen October 29, 2019 at 12:03 PM - Many thanks Cecilia, for your kind visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tania Kitchin October 27, 2019 at 8:29 AM A fun poem Anne-Lise! :) Anne-Lise Andresen October 29, 2019 at 12:02 PM - Many thanks, Tania :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams October 25, 2019 at 9:51 PM congratulations on POTW my friend :) hugs Anne-Lise Andresen October 26, 2019 at 1:57 PM - Many thanks for your kind visit and congratulations, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arturo Michael October 25, 2019 at 9:06 AM You need something SALTY to raise the PRESSURE...CONGRATULATIONS Anne-Lise ON POTW... Anne-Lise Andresen October 25, 2019 at 9:24 AM :))) - Many thanks for your kind visit and congratulations, Arturo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France October 24, 2019 at 11:12 AM Sun, congratulations on POTW with this delightful poem. My younger brother was a pain too. My mom said share so I gave him all the candy I did not like and the apples ! Anne-Lise Andresen October 24, 2019 at 1:31 PM - Many thanks for your kind visit and congratulations, D.H. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One October 23, 2019 at 2:40 PM Congrats on POTW.. Anne-Lise Andresen October 24, 2019 at 1:31 PM - Many thanks for your kind visit and congratulations, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior October 21, 2019 at 5:18 PM Congrats!! Anne-Lise on POTW!!...now time for some candy!...sending poetic love...^WW^ :o) Anne-Lise Andresen October 22, 2019 at 1:28 PM - Many thanks W.W., for your kind visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong October 21, 2019 at 1:05 PM This made me giggle Anne-Lise. My older brother used to steal our candy loot. He and mom would take the best pieces. Congratulations on having this fun poem honored with POTW! : )xxoo Anne-Lise Andresen October 22, 2019 at 1:28 PM - Many thanks for your kind visit and congratulations, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit October 21, 2019 at 9:51 AM Back with Congrats Anne-Lise on potw Anne-Lise Andresen October 22, 2019 at 1:27 PM - Many thanks for a re- visit and congratulations, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tania Kitchin October 21, 2019 at 4:50 AM A cute poem, congratulations on POTW Anne-Lise! :) Anne-Lise Andresen October 22, 2019 at 1:26 PM - Many thanks Tania, for your kind visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Brandy Nicole October 20, 2019 at 7:23 PM Oh my!!! It's payback time, is it?? Poor little brother. But, then again- he stole your Halloween Candy!! Yep!! Paybacks are rough. This is soooo cute, clever and creative. Made me smile. Congratulations Anne-Lise, on Poem of the Week. :) Brandy Anne-Lise Andresen October 21, 2019 at 2:54 AM - Many thanks Brandy, for your kind visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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