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My Bottle of Grief

I had to bottle up my grief,
      when my dad died.
It was sudden when death came like a thief.
It was I, just a girl with tears to hide;
      that went to the funeral home,
      while outside my bottle was the world.
    I still see those caskets where I had to roam,
    and pick one-  while in my bottle I curled.
I took time before I could shatter the glass,
and accept what is but the grief will not pass.

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March 27, 2018


Poetry/Rhyme/My Bottle Of Grief
Copyright Protected, ID 18-1008-212-01
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Written for the contest Picture This
sponsor, Joseph May

Inspiration- Image #2

Fifth Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 4/11/2018 10:10:00 PM
Awesome imagery and depth of emotion, BW. Most deserving placement for this gem.
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Date: 4/4/2018 5:59:00 AM
Very sad but wonderfully expressed. Kai
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Date: 4/3/2018 8:56:00 AM
Well expressed, but so sad. I can empathize, Broken Wings. A creative gift can seem a curse, when grief is addressed, since the rawness must be felt for the pain to be expressed. hug :) Congrats! ~ Artsie
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Date: 4/1/2018 10:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your interpretation of this pic.
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Date: 4/1/2018 2:41:00 PM
A beautiful poem, BW. I can relate slightly to your sadness as I'm at that age where my entire family is gone save one sister who I call as much as possible. Congratulations and I'll say a prayer for your Dad.
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Date: 4/1/2018 9:23:00 AM
Congratulations for your win BW :)
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Date: 4/1/2018 8:55:00 AM
A touching take on the photo, I can see it perfectly, beautifully done Constance, congratulations on your win <3 xomo
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Date: 4/1/2018 8:25:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, B.W. :) - Enjoy the last days of Easter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/1/2018 7:01:00 AM
A poignant poem BW...Congrats on your win
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