Constance La France Poet Free verse

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My Body Still Moves

my mind is frozen

in moments

your last breath I keep


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June 22, 2018


Poetry/Free Verse/my body still moves
Copyright Protected, ID 18-1034-125-01
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


Written for the contest Magicada 13, Body and Mind
sponsor, Maureen McGreavy

First Place

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Mick Talbot July 2, 2018 at 11:13 AM I can relate to that, another brilliant MagiCicad, congratulations on your 1st place Constance, Mick

Susan Gentry July 1, 2018 at 8:39 PM Congratulations on your #1 win. I know moments like that. :)

Paul Callus July 1, 2018 at 5:27 PM There are special moments in time which will never be erased... the passing away of a dear person is one of them. Congratulations on placing first, Constance. Regards // paul

Paul Marc July 1, 2018 at 4:19 PM Congratulations on your win ~

Agnes Krampe July 1, 2018 at 3:47 PM Awesome. Congrats on your win.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 1, 2018 at 2:39 PM A stunning piece. Congratulations on your first place finish Constance! :) xomo!

Robert Lindley June 26, 2018 at 5:42 AM Tremendous depths of pure love expressed in this one my friend. A snapshot of romance and mystery.. A fav my friend...

Ravi Sathasivam June 25, 2018 at 8:50 AM Excellent. Beautifully penned. Thanks for sharing.

Viv Wigley June 24, 2018 at 12:13 AM That's interesting- if you put a full stop (or, 'period' as you folks across the pond say) after either line one or line two, it changes the poem's context. Maybe it's just me. Fine little write, though, Constance. Viv x