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My Body Still Moves

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my mind is frozen in moments your last breath I keep _____________________________ June 22, 2018 Poetry/Free Verse/my body still moves Copyright Protected, ID 18-1034-125-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest Magicada 13, Body and Mind sponsor, Maureen McGreavy First Place

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Mick Talbot

Date: 7/2/2018 11:13:00 AM

I can relate to that, another brilliant MagiCicad, congratulations on your 1st place Constance, Mick

Susan Gentry

Date: 7/1/2018 8:39:00 PM

Congratulations on your #1 win. I know moments like that. :)

Paul Callus

Date: 7/1/2018 5:27:00 PM

There are special moments in time which will never be erased... the passing away of a dear person is one of them. Congratulations on placing first, Constance. Regards // paul

P.M. Richter

Date: 7/1/2018 4:19:00 PM

Congratulations on your win ~

Agnes Krampe

Date: 7/1/2018 3:47:00 PM

Awesome. Congrats on your win.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 7/1/2018 2:39:00 PM

A stunning piece. Congratulations on your first place finish Constance! :) xomo!

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/26/2018 5:42:00 AM

Tremendous depths of pure love expressed in this one my friend. A snapshot of romance and mystery.. A fav my friend...

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 6/25/2018 8:50:00 AM

Excellent. Beautifully penned. Thanks for sharing.

Viv Wigley

Date: 6/24/2018 12:13:00 AM

That's interesting- if you put a full stop (or, 'period' as you folks across the pond say) after either line one or line two, it changes the poem's context. Maybe it's just me. Fine little write, though, Constance. Viv x