My Black Cat's Felony

A pair of eyes glowed in pitch darkness Like two emeralds set on a black foil My black cat paced across the doorway Her tail, curled at her back like a coil With soft steps, she crossed the aisle And ventured out looking for a prey She didn't meow or make any sound Outside the house she opted out to stray Our home with its premises was her domain With glowing eyes that were cold as ice She padded up and down the drive way Looking for some unsuspecting mice The night was still and not a leaf fluttered The moon was a paling silver disc in the West In her sharp ears, fell the faint sound Of the nuzzling of fledglings in a nest Sensing there was chance to spot a prey Agile and alert she looked around Down she slid along the steep wall Following the trail of that faint sound She arched her back into a curve And moved closer and closer to the hedge She saw three birdies like dressed chicken Snuggling in an open nest at the edge Bare of plumage, they were like pieces of flesh And too young for fight or flight Their mother had sadly flown away Never expecting them to be in such a plight The cat carefully raising itself on hind legs Poised bristling for the measured kill With claws sharp, she pounced upon her prey And in a second all was silent and still Unable to flap their wings or make a sound They yielded to the needle claws of steel When the mother bird alights with worms in her beak Who can gauge the depth of pain she would feel!
Placed First March.27. 2022 Black Cat Poetry Contest Sponsor- Robert James Liguori
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Deo Avatar
April 10, 2022 at 12:03 AM
Profoundly painful, like life ( in India, as much as on earth). Animals operate bybinstinct, but humans do NOT need to as LORD JESUS dreams
Alex Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 5:58 AM
A very beautiful story. Said in an elaborately telling way. Congratulations!
Miller Avatar
April 4, 2022 at 1:42 AM
A wonderful poem Valsa, congratulations.
Gibson Avatar
March 30, 2022 at 4:48 PM
This is beautiful and well written. I expect to see it on the winner's list.
Brown Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 7:26 PM
Valsal, what a well told in detail story. Best to win. Blessings ~ Debra
Proxenos Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 12:18 PM
You are an unbelievable poetess whose creativity and imagination are within a realm of fantasia - you master the term 'Poetry' with GIGANTIC talent my friend, Hugs blessings, CATS, LION LEOPARDS, all are predators. HECTIC POEM! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
May Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 4:52 AM
A stealthy and deadly predator, Very nicely penned Valsa
Buhagiar Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 1:27 AM
A sweet and well constructed poem, Valsa. Best for a win. You deserve it.
Wolf Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 5:17 PM
Wow! What an awesome story. Liked the gruesome, non-sugar-coated aspect too. Go for it, Valsa!
Brul Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 2:32 PM
What a cinematic write! I remember my black got some years ago. Masterfully done! A sure win!
Leffanta Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 11:15 AM
Well told and tolled! Aloha!
Cunningham Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 10:24 AM
Love the imagery Valsa, it's a sad fact of nature but every living thing needs food. Tom
Poet Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 7:58 AM
Valsa, your tale is brought to life by beautifully composed and captured imagery. Excellent entry, which I consider to be a winner.
Pandit Avatar
March 27, 2022 at 4:58 AM
Well composed--splendid images bring alive the story, Valsa. Win BIG!
Horsman Avatar
March 26, 2022 at 11:19 PM
Oh, wow stunning heartfelt, poetry at its best, guaranteed to be on the winners list.
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