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My Birth

Dark brown and warm next to the coal stove. Red glinting hot through the cracks. Food smells hold my hands, caress my head. Yes, I can walk to the door. The road is lightening up, curves down to the river. I walk alone swinging my arms for the first time. Down there songs are sung in green, games are played in light, jokes are made in red, orange; blue girls' voices talk about me. OK, I'm coming.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 3/17/2025 8:02:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed day.
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Date: 1/19/2016 8:20:00 PM
DE WAAL, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
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Date: 12/9/2008 7:42:00 AM
Loved the use of vivid colors to depict sights, sounds and feelings. A very imaginative and inviting write! Wishing you a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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