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My Big Toe

Have you ever wondered Why your big toe is big? Does it help with balance While doing the jig? Can you imagine If all toes were large? It would seem like walking On a very large barge Strange how everything Seems the right size Cause what if your arms Were as big as your thighs? Big toes are great For testing your bath Or counting to ten To help with your math One thing's for certain They're just the right size For stirring your soup Or tying bow ties This poem's for a friend A new star in my sky Sure hope she will like it It's my very best try! © Jack Ellison 2013

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 8/6/2013 6:46:00 PM

You poem has a great tone. It must be your intonation. Nothing for which you must atone. Do you vacation in Boca Raton? You have a gift for humor, sir! I hope you impressed your friend and can find the mistletoe. Best of luck, and thank you for being such a good humor.

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/6/2013 7:12:00 PM

Woops... TOEsisies... too many "si's" LOL

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/6/2013 7:05:00 PM

WOWSERS!!! You is really getting to it with both feet and all your TOEsisies, My Duke!

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 8/5/2013 9:15:00 PM

Another entertaining read! Better than some comedy shows today, I'd say. Was that a rhyme? I'm on a role today! This was toe-riffic! I'm sure she enjoyed toe-tally. Okay I'm done. :) Always, Laura

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/6/2013 7:51:00 AM

Toe-riffic... toe-tally!!! Now you've got it! LOL Love ya sweet thing! Huggs, Jack xoxox

Sue-Ellen Newman

Date: 8/5/2013 7:34:00 AM

I am sure your friend will love, it I sure did, this is so perfect, yes everything is so perfect in proportion , it couldn't be any way else, great read, blessings sueellen

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/5/2013 7:51:00 AM

Guess I had one of my weird moments when I wrote this one eh! LOL Thanks Sue-Ellen... big hugs, Jack xoxox

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 8/5/2013 5:30:00 AM

Well I must that your poems are really fun to read Jack.Thanks for your comment on mines.

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/5/2013 7:49:00 AM

Life is just a bowl of cherries! I've been laughing my way though for decades! LOL Thanks my friend! Cheers!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/4/2013 7:03:00 PM

Hi Jack change thr to the on line 4. Line nine hoe change to how. The poem is a lot of fun, I am sure she will like it. Thanks for the visit Jack.

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/4/2013 9:13:00 PM

Thanks Richard... getting sloppy in my old age! 78 next Sunday! YIKES!

Carol Eastman

Date: 8/4/2013 10:08:00 AM

A fun read... You should see Dragons toes... with painted claw toe nails no less... He thinks they are so cute... He says we should be so lucky to have feet like his... LOL

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/4/2013 10:21:00 AM

This one was for the kiddies and Dragon! hugs, Jacko xoxox