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My Big Grey

Big Grey was my favorite cat of all time. He came with no grand pedigree. He didn't need that, for that wonderful cat was the object of my affection.. He was but a stray, who somehow found his way to this home where he was so welcomed. He made himself king, and ruled everything, the cats and the big dog and me. There were other cats here, that he treated as mere common things to be kept in their places. My lap was his own, which he quickly made known to the others that I was his only. That beautiful cat always there when I sat, his front legs round my neck he'd entwine. He'd stare at my face, 'til I needed my space and I'd him a toy to annoy. He'd never more roam, for this was his home where he'd be contented for life. It was easy to see he belonged here with me where he was my favorite feline. I was caught uanaware finding him lying there, unable to answer my call. I couldn't believe he was going to leave, this dear cat that I loved so much. But now that he's gone, I know he has gone on to the place where good kitties should be. May he find up above an angel to love until I might find him again.. For Debbie's inner rhyme contest

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Date: 3/14/2011 5:37:00 AM
I am not a cat person but I can relate to the love you feel for your pets Joyce. I also appriciate the fact that you took in an animal that had no home. I have 2 dogs (and have had other's throughout my life that will always have a special place in my heart) and they are both rescues. In my experience, these are the best pets. It's like they know what you did for them and they appreciate it. Good job.
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Date: 3/13/2011 10:24:00 AM
A sweet and touching poem Joyce.. I am such an animal lover too my friend and have two cats and one naughty shepherd puppy .. a very tender expressive write of luv.. thankxx for your wonderful comment Joyce.. I would miss u too my friend and we must keep reinforcing our main goal is the POETRY aspect of sharing and learning and friendships.. this battle this week and only intensified my luv of poetry all the more and the unique bonds formed on this site with lovely poets as u Joyce .. thankxxx..
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Date: 3/13/2011 6:04:00 AM
Dear Joyce, your "Big Grey" sounds a lot like Katy Cat. There were other cats in the house and they all liked to sit on my lap. If others got there first, Katy would stealthily crawl up until her face was pressed right against mine. She ruled! The other cats knew it. When I found her dead after more than 20 years of companionship, it tore my heart out. You have done a remarkably touching poem for Deb's new contest and I'm always pulling for you to win. Love and blessings, Carolyn
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Date: 3/13/2011 4:13:00 AM
such a beautiful tribute to your dear kitty..I,too have a big grey kitty I love with all my heart and I sure would miss him if he left me to become an angel! Good luck Joyce..love,Deb
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Date: 3/12/2011 10:13:00 PM
oh, my goodness, DEB has a new contest TOO?? I just can't keep up! This is delightful. It reminds me so much of my dear Callie Cat. I miss her so much. My two new ones together cannot measure up to HER, rest her soul.
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Date: 3/12/2011 10:07:00 PM
Good luck in the contest.. nice...p.d.
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