My Big Bang Theory - Nighttime Musing

Envy devoured me as I witness the wind,
Caressing her milky complexion,
Gently blowing the hair off those defined rosy skin,
Revealing Stargates into Heaven,

Within the depths, finding warmth pouts and sultry smiles,
The smell of home flooded my memories,
Every touch and movements pausing the dials,
A stellar conquest of sublime mysteries.

Into being, I submerged in an infinite darkness,
An explosion illuminating the void, creating my Universe.

9th December 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 1/4/2016 8:46:00 PM
Thank you so much for all the comments! I am ever grateful for having the opportunity to have my pieces read and appreciated. Much love to all! Happy New Year and have a great 2016!
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Date: 1/3/2016 9:14:00 AM
Lovely Fariq.
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Date: 12/29/2015 6:02:00 PM
FARIQ, Congratulations on your nice win. Enjoy the coming year..... SKAT
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Date: 12/29/2015 5:24:00 PM
EXPLOSIVE!! Congrats on a bang-up job here, Fariq!!
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Date: 12/29/2015 1:13:00 AM
Very lovely Fariq.. congrats on great win!
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Date: 12/28/2015 7:55:00 PM
Congratulations on winning 2nd place!
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Date: 12/28/2015 7:20:00 PM
A lovely piece, well done, Fariq. Regards, Viv
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Date: 12/28/2015 6:01:00 PM
Fariq beautiful and cleve. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/28/2015 3:27:00 PM
Best definition of "SMITTEN" ever. Well deserved placement in the contest Fariq. Love the final couplet
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Date: 12/28/2015 1:01:00 PM
Love the title and the sensual imagery Fariq:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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