My Best Pick Up Line

Have I ever told you that you were perfect,
Because certainly you are more than that,
You must be one of the great wonders of the world,
Never before you have I seen something so elegant,
I am greatly entranced by you,
You are beyond magnificent,
You are the only one of your kind,
Unique but just not unique,
Uncommon, Unexampled, there has never been one like yourself,
Even Hercules in all his beauty could never compare to your Lusciousness, 
You are truly marvelous.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Boddie Avatar
December 4, 2015 at 9:33 AM
oh my, how did you know....you must have seen my inner glow....but can I please tell you this....your unique quality is impossible to resist....you invade my thoughts each day and conquer my dreams each night....I will be the souperman to your kryptonite....you weaken my knees, I don't know what else to say....on more Beauty than you, my eyes could never lay....I got a few pickup lines myself....lol....but great write winda....;)
A   Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 6:00 PM
Hi Winda. Congratulations on your XOOL flirting poetic win. Love LINDA"
Adams Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 8:57 AM
Who could possibly be gullible enough to believe all of that?
Saintil Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 9:04 AM
Well maybe a Narcissus.
A. Sharma Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 2:35 AM
Congrats on ur awesome win Winda!
Saintil Avatar
July 21, 2015 at 8:53 AM
Thanks guys. <3
Carter Avatar
July 21, 2015 at 7:46 AM
Love your flirt Winda congrats !
Wigley Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 8:34 PM
Thanks, Winda, you're very kind. Great Flirt, Viv x
A  Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 2:31 PM
Winda, congratulations on your flirtatious win. SKAT LOVE
Lawless Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 2:12 PM
sorry Winda but I doubt if I could have kept a straight face listening to these wonderfully tempting ego pleasers. Congrats on the win
Allison Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 2:05 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Winda:-) Hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 1:59 PM
Winda, congratulations you on your win a 7 . Hugs Eve
Nance Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 1:45 PM
Flirty and fun, nicely done!
Allison Avatar
May 1, 2015 at 3:36 PM
very clever write Winda - for the contest Judy just wants one pick up line :-) hugs Jan xxx
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