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My Best Pick Up Line

"I can tell you are a Libra" "No !" "I am seldom ever wrong Ah, of course you are a Taurus" "No!" "But the feeling was so strong Now it hits me, you're a Leo I should have recognized the traits "No!" "Just please give me a moment In my mind, I see a date "You're a Pisces now ascending With the cusp of Capricorn And Scorpio was setting on the day that you were born The moon was in Virgo With Aries on the rise and before you say, 'No' again Just let me say, "I love your eyes "

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Date: 5/19/2015 2:42:00 AM
Oh how witty and humorous. A #7. A fave.
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 5/19/2015 7:43:00 AM
Thank you Nandita, I should have mentioned , that it never worked for me. lol
Date: 5/1/2015 1:45:00 PM
How could she resist
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 5/19/2015 7:43:00 AM
Believe me Timmy. she could,lol
Date: 5/1/2015 9:20:00 AM
Jerry, This is a funny one indeed!! I just happen to be a Libra and my wife is a Taurus. (Go figure that one!!). Good Luck in the Contest!! Just make sure you emphasize the last line though for the contest. A "7" from me too!! Best Always, Gary
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 5/19/2015 7:44:00 AM
Thanks Gary, it's always a pleasure .....
Date: 5/1/2015 2:38:00 AM
I this is very amusing jerry but the way I am interpreting the contest is literally a 'one liner' Hugs jan xx
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 5/1/2015 5:36:00 AM
I'm sure you are right Jan, but I just couldn't help myself---Technically though--my one Liner does appears at the end of my poem. LOL
Date: 4/30/2015 8:27:00 PM
Oh Jerry, how could you miss out with all the bases covered. Thanks for the chuckle - Lindsay
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 5/1/2015 5:38:00 AM
That and a pocket full of money
Date: 4/30/2015 8:08:00 PM
SWEET ~SKAT~
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 4/30/2015 8:17:00 PM
Thanks Skat, it never hurts to have a plan B