Jerry T Curtis Poet Light Verse

My Best Pick Up Line

"I can tell you are a Libra"

"No !"  

"I am seldom ever wrong
Ah, of course you are a Taurus" 

"No!"

"But the feeling was so strong
Now it hits me, you're a Leo
I should have recognized the traits

"No!"

"Just please give me a moment
In my mind, I see a date

"You're a Pisces now ascending
With the cusp of Capricorn
And Scorpio was setting on the day
that you were born 
The moon was in Virgo
With Aries on the rise
and before you say, 
'No' again
Just let me say, 
"I love your eyes "

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Nandita Das May 19, 2015 at 2:42 AM Oh how witty and humorous. A #7. A fave. Jerry T Curtis May 19, 2015 at 7:43 AM Thank you Nandita, I should have mentioned , that it never worked for me. lol

Tim Smith May 1, 2015 at 1:45 PM How could she resist Jerry T Curtis May 19, 2015 at 7:43 AM Believe me Timmy. she could,lol

Gary Bateman May 1, 2015 at 9:20 AM Jerry, This is a funny one indeed!! I just happen to be a Libra and my wife is a Taurus. (Go figure that one!!). Good Luck in the Contest!! Just make sure you emphasize the last line though for the contest. A "7" from me too!! Best Always, Gary Jerry T Curtis May 19, 2015 at 7:44 AM Thanks Gary, it's always a pleasure .....

Jan Allison May 1, 2015 at 2:38 AM I this is very amusing jerry but the way I am interpreting the contest is literally a 'one liner' Hugs jan xx Jerry T Curtis May 1, 2015 at 5:36 AM I'm sure you are right Jan, but I just couldn't help myself---Technically though--my one Liner does appears at the end of my poem. LOL

Lindsay Laurie April 30, 2015 at 8:27 PM Oh Jerry, how could you miss out with all the bases covered. Thanks for the chuckle - Lindsay Jerry T Curtis May 1, 2015 at 5:38 AM That and a pocket full of money

Skat A April 30, 2015 at 8:08 PM SWEET ~SKAT~ Jerry T Curtis April 30, 2015 at 8:17 PM Thanks Skat, it never hurts to have a plan B