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My Best Friend

No need to PRETEND, my best FRIEND, never you'll leave me alone be it, in need, be it, for fun, given me the pure gold love you and i KNOW, there is no GLOW, if we cross our comfort zone the world, assume, make perceptions, let’s give them a hefty shove The waves COME, kiss the sand with a HUM, and leave a happy shore every moment, grows a yearning hope, share they secrets of life yet NEVER, they wait FOREVER, for freedom’s sake, they adore you, the shore, I’m the wave, we live in harmony, no strife Sure DISBELIEF, sigh of RELIEF, our hearts don't beat together time is not a prisoner, sure it flows, through our hands, its free dreams we SHARE, are songs on AIR, two strange octaves altogether yet we feel we are twin flowers, swing in wind, lit up with glee No need to BLUSH, no need to RUSH, love is just like a slow train admire, the beauty of life, admire, the differences in hue enjoy the BEST, leave alone the REST, together, feel the pain kind soul, I’m glad, you are my best friend and my life partner too Wrote for, In Rhymes Sublime Poetry Contest 18 November 2020 Sponsored by, Joseph May Rhyming verified with www.rhymezone.com Number of syllables verified with www.howmanysyllables.com Grammar verified with PS Grammar check Won 1st place at In Rhymes Sublime Poetry Contest judged On 18th November 2020

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Date: 11/20/2020 9:31:00 AM
Congrats on this great winner. Sara
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Rasitha Ranasinghe
Date: 11/21/2020 3:55:00 AM
Dear Sara, Thank you for your comment. Rasitha
Date: 11/19/2020 7:59:00 AM
Your best friend is your life partner...you are blessed Rasitha :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Rasitha Ranasinghe
Date: 11/20/2020 5:19:00 AM
Dear Linda, Thank you for your comment. Appreciate it. :) Rasitha
Date: 11/19/2020 6:08:00 AM
The treasure of friendship, Congrats on your win Resitha..
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Rasitha Ranasinghe
Date: 11/20/2020 5:21:00 AM
Dear Joseph, Im humbly happy about the placement in your contest. Thank you for lifting me higher. Rasitha
Date: 11/18/2020 7:17:00 AM
Rasitha, a lovely poem, best of luck in the contest _Constance
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Rasitha Ranasinghe
Date: 11/20/2020 5:22:00 AM
Dear Constance, Thank you for your lovely comment too. Rasitha
Date: 11/17/2020 7:38:00 PM
A glorious tribute. Wow!
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Rasitha Ranasinghe
Date: 11/17/2020 10:45:00 PM
Dear Caren, Thank you for the great comment. Appreciate it. Rasitha